regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jun-02/11:21 AM
moving.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-02/6:20 AM
mmm...colourful..
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jun-02/6:31 AM
Great rhythm.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jun-02/7:55 AM
Your rhyme schemes are a little..young, but I'd give you a hug anyway.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Jun-02/7:59 AM
the phrasing of the pieces could possibly use some work.I'm not repeatedly bitching, I just accidentally clicked submit before I was done. It would be interesting to know you personally at the time you wrote these.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Jul-02/1:50 PM
fan-bloody-tastic!
Re: lurcher for lunch - for James Kelman by roy rocket	6-Jul-02/7:16 AM
Fuck!:)
Re: wizard master by beakism	6-Jul-02/8:17 AM
I, Kaerith, priestess of Rastbaxis, salute you.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-02/12:25 PM
fun.
Re: Skin Deep Sun by Morvium	8-Jul-02/2:01 PM
I like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-02/11:51 AM
Modern pop.Very profound.Hear that thump?It's your hollywood crackwhore dying.That thump you heard years ago was the originality of your theme doing the same.
Re: Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8	10-Jul-02/11:54 AM
Can't wait till California sinks.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-02/12:05 PM
Focus on something.Francesca Lia Block called. She wants royalties.
Re: The Forest Child by forestchild7	10-Jul-02/12:08 PM
Nice.Nothing wrong with optimism.
Re: And they both knew by Morvium	10-Jul-02/12:23 PM
It's sad...I've seen people in relationships like that too.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-02/1:37 PM
monkeys are good.
Re: i will bare it: by Sapphire	10-Jul-02/1:39 PM
good, but the rhythm needs work.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-02/1:41 PM
Sappy. Learn spelling and punctuation.
Re: IV (Deuteronomy's Lament) by coalcracker	10-Jul-02/1:42 PM
what the hell is that?
Re: Sleep Well by jriemerm	10-Jul-02/1:53 PM
great imagery!