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#9 (Haiku) by mikejedw Thick gray knitted socks,
so difficult to pull on!
Last cold day of spring.
Up the ladder:
Carrie
Down the ladder:
My floss by Twiggy the second
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6875
Posted: May 13, 2002 8:11 AM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2002 8:11 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.724751 Overall Rank: 11855 Comments:
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anonymous @ 204.245.176.100
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13-May-02/9:28 AM
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hooray!
perfect. :)
why the numbering, though? [geh -- I need to make it so you can comment on comments!]
Great twist on the tradition; gray socks for cherry blossoms...
and the exclamation of response.. very nice
Ah, comments on comments! You've been really busy, man--this is pretty great. Anyway, the numbering is there because I tend not to like giving haiku titles. I think, in larger poems, that I've actually written titles that are longer than haiku. It just seems overwhelming for such a short poem.
Yay! Feet are happiest naked.
You had to throw 'spring' in there didn't you? Just couldn't resist it, I guess. Afterall, if you mention 'spring', loads of girls are bound to think 'Oh this Haiku is so beautiful'.
HMMMPH!
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