#9

by mikejedw

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 May 2002 · 7 comments

Thick gray knitted socks, so difficult to pull on! Last cold day of spring.

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7 comments

[8] anonymous 13-May-02/9:28 AM Reply

hooray!

[7] nentwined 13-May-02/7:19 PM Reply

perfect. :)

why the numbering, though? [geh -- I need to make it so you can comment on comments!]

[8] anonymous 19-May-02/12:35 AM Reply

Great twist on the tradition; gray socks for cherry blossoms...
and the exclamation of response..
very nice

[n/a] mikejedw 21-May-02/8:17 AM Reply

Ah, comments on comments! You've been really busy, man--this is pretty great. Anyway, the numbering is there because I tend not to like giving haiku titles. I think, in larger poems, that I've actually written titles that are longer than haiku. It just seems overwhelming for such a short poem.

[n/a] razorgrin 21-Jun-02/7:43 AM Reply

Yay! Feet are happiest naked.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Aug-02/8:57 AM Reply

You had to throw 'spring' in there didn't you? Just couldn't resist it, I guess. Afterall, if you mention 'spring', loads of girls are bound to think 'Oh this Haiku is so beautiful'.

[3] Amelia 11-Sep-02/1:15 PM Reply

HMMMPH!