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My floss by Twiggy the second (Lyric) by horus8
Sometimes I just can’t ever try to live without All the suffering, all the gingivitis Sometimes my body goes, but the mind won’t allow Trying to avoid all the plaque in the world (Bridge & Crown work pre-root-canal) My fears, my faults, my tears, my floss My tries, my trust, my lies, my loss My loss of floss (horus on sitar) No wants, no teeth Just a mind to set and a rage to feed No wants, no gums Just a soul to find and a squishy plum Sometimes I try to change the wanted dentistry Under my own gas mask Sometimes it’s better to find a way to take a tank and hide within a flask (horus on steel drums) So swallow, marshmallow, oil of carro Losing the trust in my floss So receded, depleted, mistreated I am your sore bloody gums (Chorus/Ending/brush your fucking teeth)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6875
Weighted score: 4.724751
Overall Rank: 11856
Posted: June 17, 2003 4:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 4:22 PM PDT
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 17-Jun-03/4:34 PM | Reply
that shit is tooo funny. no, no. That shit is TOOOO funny!!! LOL 40-love.

I'm dribbling from laughing so hard.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > INTRANSIT | 17-Jun-03/6:55 PM | Reply
Yes 'tis a mad cackle, I agree tee hee.
[10] JoyLuck @ 24.29.8.86 | 18-Jun-03/12:41 AM | Reply
lol!!!!!!!!!
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > JoyLuck | 18-Jun-03/10:11 AM | Reply
A senseless plug

http://www.garageband.com/genre/raprock

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