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13-Feb-03/2:38 PM |
it made me cry. very hard to do. well done it puts everything into perspective.
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Re: Past by Dostoyevsky |
11-Mar-03/1:46 PM |
heres a grade coz u have none yet- why dont u re do blinded also- it is one of my favorite poems u know!
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Re: Blinded by Dostoyevsky |
13-Mar-03/2:20 PM |
yay wonderfully good i love it
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Re: Fate by Dostoyevsky |
16-Mar-03/1:54 PM |
bit random stamp deary - its all a bit hopeless nowadays huh?
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Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
16-Mar-03/2:03 PM |
YES! WONDERFUL BRILLIANT I LOVE UR WORK SO MUCH
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Re: Night And Day by MuDvAyNe |
16-Mar-03/2:05 PM |
hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
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16-Mar-03/2:12 PM |
are u male or female? ornella sez ur female! good poem nice structure
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16-Mar-03/2:23 PM |
i dont know what to say! well written?!
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Re: Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:24 AM |
yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works
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Re: Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:30 AM |
Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!
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Re: Heart Made of Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:34 AM |
well i like this poem - bit cliched (cant spell) but thats poetry for you - its nice to read someones poetry who seems to have the same problems as me but worse! ;o)
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Re: Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:37 AM |
Also good - i think your work is very interesting, parts are brilliant, parts shite but definatly lots of potential, makes me feel sad to read them so god knows how u feel
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Re: Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Mar-03/3:41 AM |
Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9
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2-Apr-03/12:49 PM |
HAHAHAHA WOW HOW DO YOU REMEMBER ALL THESE TONY BLAIR SPEECHES? such a good idea - but what else can you do before bordom sets in?
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2-Apr-03/12:51 PM |
Same i can make out something about love. good try
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2-Apr-03/12:53 PM |
Well actually the arrows point is rather blurred
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Re: oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w |
2-Apr-03/12:58 PM |
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Re: We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Apr-03/1:23 PM |
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