on STAR WARS by Garrett S Sexton
6 Apr 2003, 8:55 PM
buh?
on some deleted poem
18 Apr 2003, 9:29 AM
beautiful. 9.
on Hunting for a vessel by Nice guy
8 Apr 2003, 3:19 PM
!
Really good!
On first reading, it really flowed, and the images strong.
Good good.
Really good!
On first reading, it really flowed, and the images strong.
Good good.
on some deleted poem
8 Apr 2003, 3:36 PM
what can I say...
10
10
on la vieja loca con los gatos by <~>
6 Apr 2003, 9:16 PM
It took me until the third stanza to realize this was about cats. I can be dense sometimes.
I like it.
I like quite a bit.
I like it.
I like quite a bit.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 9:28 AM
ignore the trolls.
infact...BOYCOTT!
and the poem was good.
infact...BOYCOTT!
and the poem was good.
on some deleted poem
6 Apr 2003, 8:50 PM
:-D
I funckin' love it!
Bravo! Encore! Ten! Ten! Ten!
I funckin' love it!
Bravo! Encore! Ten! Ten! Ten!
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
23 Apr 2003, 12:32 AM
whoa.
on Voodoo on channel 13 by Bachus
6 Apr 2003, 8:23 PM
Fugu!
on Front Line Center by Blindproject217
24 Apr 2003, 8:20 PM
Actually, this one isn't bad. Any specific problems?
on "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus
8 Apr 2003, 3:23 PM
Love the first part. Not crazy about the second part. don't like the fat lady. But what the hellmp.
on A morning conflict by INTRANSIT
8 Apr 2003, 1:43 PM
mmmmm coffee. beverage of the gods.
on some deleted poem
8 Apr 2003, 2:15 PM
Hey gw, I'm curious to see what you think of my recent posts, specifically "the photobooth".
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 11:18 PM
This is a change of pace.
I never liked baseball, but I'll wait for the next part...
I never liked baseball, but I'll wait for the next part...
on Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}>
6 Apr 2003, 10:03 PM
I messed with black magic once. Not something you want to do lightly. It follows you. Just behind and to the left.
There it is. I guess I should dive in, go all the way, follow the dark muse to its bloody end. Maybe then, maybe then,
I'd be free. Meanwhile, I'll just send a curse to all mine enemies.
There it is. I guess I should dive in, go all the way, follow the dark muse to its bloody end. Maybe then, maybe then,
I'd be free. Meanwhile, I'll just send a curse to all mine enemies.
on some deleted poem
6 Apr 2003, 8:25 PM
there's no shame to be blamed.
pithy and sweet.
pithy and sweet.
on A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus
6 Apr 2003, 8:29 PM
I'm a sentimental fool.
A bitter sentimental fool.
A bitter sentimental fool.
on One More Mile by marvelis
9 Mar 2003, 7:17 AM
I liked the last two lines.
(Gosh, I'm such a positive thinker!)
(Gosh, I'm such a positive thinker!)
You are the griddle, I am the meat. <---- sorry, that bit is from a song I'm listening to at the moment. Looooovage!