| Re: One More Mile by marvelis |
9-Mar-03/7:17 AM |
I liked the last two lines.
(Gosh, I'm such a positive thinker!)
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| Re: Voodoo on channel 13 by Bachus |
6-Apr-03/8:23 PM |
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6-Apr-03/8:25 PM |
there's no shame to be blamed.
pithy and sweet.
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| Re: A Love Story For The Dead by Caducus |
6-Apr-03/8:29 PM |
I'm a sentimental fool.
A bitter sentimental fool.
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6-Apr-03/8:50 PM |
:-D
I funckin' love it!
Bravo! Encore! Ten! Ten! Ten!
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| Re: STAR WARS by Garrett S Sexton |
6-Apr-03/8:55 PM |
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| Re: la vieja loca con los gatos by <~> |
6-Apr-03/9:16 PM |
It took me until the third stanza to realize this was about cats. I can be dense sometimes.
I like it.
I like quite a bit.
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| Re: Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Apr-03/10:03 PM |
I messed with black magic once. Not something you want to do lightly. It follows you. Just behind and to the left.
There it is. I guess I should dive in, go all the way, follow the dark muse to its bloody end. Maybe then, maybe then,
I'd be free. Meanwhile, I'll just send a curse to all mine enemies.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Apr-03/9:28 AM |
ignore the trolls.
infact...BOYCOTT!
and the poem was good.
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7-Apr-03/11:18 PM |
This is a change of pace.
I never liked baseball, but I'll wait for the next part...
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| Re: Char by Amelia |
8-Apr-03/1:09 AM |
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| Re: A morning conflict by INTRANSIT |
8-Apr-03/1:43 PM |
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mmmmm coffee. beverage of the gods.
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8-Apr-03/2:15 PM |
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Hey gw, I'm curious to see what you think of my recent posts, specifically "the photobooth".
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| Re: Hunting for a vessel by Nice guy |
8-Apr-03/3:19 PM |
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Really good!
On first reading, it really flowed, and the images strong.
Good good.
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| Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
8-Apr-03/3:23 PM |
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Love the first part. Not crazy about the second part. don't like the fat lady. But what the hellmp.
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8-Apr-03/3:36 PM |
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18-Apr-03/9:29 AM |
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| Re: Like and Unlike by Christof |
19-Apr-03/10:07 PM |
Not so sure about that last stanza, but the rest is Great.
You are the griddle, I am the meat. <---- sorry, that bit is from a song I'm listening to at the moment. Looooovage!
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| Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
23-Apr-03/12:32 AM |
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| Re: Front Line Center by Blindproject217 |
24-Apr-03/8:20 PM |
Actually, this one isn't bad. Any specific problems?
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