Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
12-Mar-05/1:49 PM |
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Re: Getting Pumped Up to Get Laid by PodPoet |
12-Mar-05/1:47 PM |
I like it... believe the end could use somethin else, add a lil somethin, but I still think you did a good job.
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Re: The Pipe Scraping Tool by peaceseeker |
11-Mar-05/9:32 PM |
I like it a lot, similar feelings run through me all day, just couldn't put em into words... good job doin so.
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Re: Endless Sleep by WithoutLife |
11-Mar-05/9:28 PM |
Know how you feel... but thats just life right.
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Re: Black Woman by jroday |
11-Mar-05/9:25 PM |
I like it.. I have a similar poem. I like how u portray the black woman, we are "Majestic creatures Indeed".
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Re: Rays of Sun Spell Freedom by peaceseeker |
11-Mar-05/9:23 PM |
very interesting, I like your style.
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Re: spiders and butterflies by Mona Lisa |
2-Mar-05/9:25 AM |
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Re: Into the Wreckage by zodiac |
23-Feb-05/5:28 PM |
I enjoyed it, More than I you know. There are ways I would like to explain what I think of it to u, but I doubt they would do justice. So I'll leave it at this; beyond mere idea.
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Re: a comment on Mistress of Dreams by Dreammaker1024 |
23-Feb-05/5:20 PM |
The first three verses are about the 3 things in my life that I adore and that I let into "me". So in their palms they hold me, they hold everything that I feel, think, know.
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Re: Premarital Sex (Zombie Fantasy) by Sigh'ense... |
9-Dec-02/7:03 PM |
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Re: Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping |
7-Dec-02/7:30 PM |
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Re: FHjk by Dark Angle |
3-Dec-02/11:45 AM |
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Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah |
7-Nov-02/6:35 PM |
It is a very well written poem and also sweet. At parts you flowed very nicely then you broke up. But it was very good.
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