Re: Daniela by little_angel_maria	22-Oct-02/5:12 AM
Oh, come on. Forgiveness ring a bell? Get over yourself! People take themselves far too seriously these days.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:13 AM
Well worth the patience of reading this. A commendable effort which is very retrospective.
Re: Love by little_angel_maria	22-Oct-02/5:14 AM
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	22-Oct-02/5:15 AM
Well, Its a funny reflection on teen life. A little blunt and insensitive, but I guess thats us teenagers! Good
Re: Gutless by temptalia	22-Oct-02/5:17 AM
Good, except a whole poem about a gunshot? If it were dedicated to someone who had been shot for a good cause it would be very good. However with no personal background it is a bit boring. It would be better if we knew the person who had been shot.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:18 AM
Too long.
Re: A Well Worth Wait by savannah	22-Oct-02/5:18 AM
Nice and uncomplicated.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:19 AM
Hmmmmmmm.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:20 AM
Ver amusing.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:21 AM
Another winner there Mr. Cat. Your use of visual aids is original. Why should a poem be about words?
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/5:22 AM
I see a theme running here. A commendable effort again!
Re: Blade by Blade	22-Oct-02/5:28 AM
Ok Blade, its quite good really. (your still a cad though,)
Re: Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator	22-Oct-02/5:38 AM
Good.
Re: #17 by mikejedw	23-Oct-02/3:58 AM
Very descriptive. It reminds me why I love Autumn.
Re: one man opponent by chinstrap	23-Oct-02/4:07 AM
I don't think it needs an exclamation mark. It was going really well untill the last line, 'he is a winner!' just trivializes it I'm afraid.
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones	23-Oct-02/4:10 AM
This irritates me as a subject. There is nothing wrong with being middle class. You find we run many of the businesses and companies employing the worker. Without middle class financial investment the economy would completely collapse. Now the aristocracy, they contribute nothing to economy. Yet we must preserve them as it part of (my) culture. Other than that it is sound.
Re: Truths by Nicholas Jones	23-Oct-02/4:17 AM
Also, socialism only works in heavan where it's not needed and hell where it's already working. Obvioulsy the awful 60 years of communism in Russia and the Eastern Bloc and the slow return to captitalism by China, Vietnam and Cuba mean nothing? Socialism just leads to oppression because with evryone being the same, the need to be better is only intensified.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/4:19 AM
Odd
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/4:24 AM
I do like this. Very frivolous, in a good way. (I think frivolous can be construed ina bad way). Oh I do so like using long words, makes me feel Jovial, Jocular and Gay. (we don't use that word for its true meaning enough).
Re: glue by chinstrap	23-Oct-02/4:34 AM
I like it.