on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin
16 Dec 2002, 10:09 AM
greatness. i had that happen to friend before. good stuff. a nine
on I Lost My Way by abbaslittleclingon
24 Nov 2002, 11:59 PM
similar to some stuff i have written. i like the language of the poem. good job
on Tuesday, again and again and... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Nov 2002, 12:18 AM
i got the tune of "No Rain" by Blind melon in my head while i was reading that...which made it even better then it already was.
on Hero Within a Mother by confuzdlilgirl
25 Nov 2002, 12:21 AM
that's great...really good actually.
on unlucky by rosiebailey
25 Nov 2002, 12:22 AM
damn dude...that blows for you
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Nov 2002, 12:25 AM
that's one long ass poem..decent
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 12:38 AM
wait...is this all some sort of joke...or are you serious...cuz i hope it's a joke..the chorus is funny...but the rest...well it's funny but not in the same way.
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2002, 11:44 PM
it's almost too much for me to handle
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2002, 10:22 PM
damn...i'm pretty sure that i'm one of those "greenhorns" although i'd like to think not. anyway your poem is true enough...although no mention of menstruation...i thought you said it went with everything!
on why i look like a man by rosiebailey
8 Oct 2002, 10:25 PM
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2002, 10:28 PM
so far you're poems never cease to amaze me. in a good way of course. so good...can't find the words...
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2002, 5:17 AM
what a great line "a touch like an explosion" extemely powerful. cool stuff limonade! muahahahahaha
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2002, 5:23 AM
ever so true dude...ever so true. i agree with the song angle...throw it together with some sort of jesus-based rant full of screaming and self hatred
on The day I told her by dalva
7 Oct 2002, 5:26 AM
got blasted eh? yeah it happens to the best of us. no worries. when everything looks to be going sour listen to some deftones and break some shit
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2002, 5:32 AM
alright i don't mean to sound like an ass or anything but when i read the first and second stanza i got a creepy vision of a 15year old wanting to get with a 7 year old...and then i saw your name...and felt like poop...still a good poem though 8/10
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
7 Oct 2002, 5:39 AM
i like the line about "the artist's discretion". this is gonna sound stupid but after reading comments on this site and seeing how bitchy people can be about other people's work...well truer words have never been said dude. i'm out...please disregard my foolishness
on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
7 Oct 2002, 6:03 AM
that's good. are the corners real or metaphorical...cuz if they're real theniwould agree with the lover; it would not be love...but if metaphorical...it makes for a good poem. i'm out 8/10
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2002, 5:53 AM
good god what a long conversation...exellent poem though. i do not agree with the vast majority here though. i think the word menstruating goes well with the poem...gives the poem a very poignant feeling. 10/10