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6-Oct-02/10:47 AM |
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i liked it...good word use, excellent imagery. overall a good poem
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| Re: coffee cup by nonee |
6-Oct-02/10:49 AM |
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decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself
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6-Oct-02/10:52 AM |
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i found it hard to follow. lots of big words though. good vocabulary and such
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6-Oct-02/5:42 PM |
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well i guess we'll be going tit for tat. yeah...no structure... a little bit of rhyming...horrible if you really think about it...nah just kiddin...you see what i did there? a 10 i tell you...a 10
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