on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2002, 10:47 AM
i liked it...good word use, excellent imagery. overall a good poem
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2002, 5:42 PM
well i guess we'll be going tit for tat. yeah...no structure... a little bit of rhyming...horrible if you really think about it...nah just kiddin...you see what i did there? a 10 i tell you...a 10
on coffee cup by nonee
6 Oct 2002, 10:49 AM
decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself
on some deleted poem
6 Oct 2002, 10:52 AM
i found it hard to follow. lots of big words though. good vocabulary and such