Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	5-Sep-03/8:27 PM
I like it, I see now why it rates so high. kudos
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Sep-03/8:16 PM
Well done joe I really enjoyed this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Sep-03/9:22 AM
Who gave me the 0, what's that about? Speak if you dislike this so much. It takes a pretty crappy poem to deserve a goose egg and if you think so then vocalize your dislike or quit with the petty shit.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Sep-03/9:40 AM
Didn't care much for this at all - surprise surprise I think the dove was the Holy Spirit telling you that you have blinded yourself to His truth like Saul on the road to Damascus you were blinded so that you might see things more clearly.
Re: Plum diggity by tadpole	8-Sep-03/10:52 AM
My tastebuds swoon in anticipation, where to find these tasty morsels?
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Sep-03/3:37 PM
This is the rest of this poem.. Dark Angel I'd hope to fine a weapon I might somehow employ against these evil forces with a notion to destroy. Yet even this meager hope to cleanse my broken slate is hindered by a problem my mind just can't equate. If evil is only a spirit, no flesh or blood revealed it would be impossible to locate. In my thoughts it's well concealed. I can hear its mocking laughter calling out to me it's whispers drive me crazy and says it'll never let me be.
Re: Summer by MaliqaTara	8-Sep-03/7:04 PM
What happened? You seemed so happy.
Re: A Question of the Future by razorgrin	8-Sep-03/7:32 PM
Here,s a 0 for the bitch in a tree For all the 0's she's given me I don't care for her her shit I have to say But when giving her 0's I don't go out of my way But now I'm playing the game she plays. She looks at the best of the poems here Then hands me 0's like she has no fear. It's not the content or the rhythm that gets her bent Or maybe it is How the FUCK would we know if she doesn't leave a comment. But that's just like our friend To leave the worst possible vote Like the poem could be written by her sex partner the goat.
Re: A Question of the Future by razorgrin	8-Sep-03/7:37 PM
I didn't mean to bash your best bud, but I couldn,t think of anything else to rhyme with vote.
Re: Something Lost, Something Gained by Irischer Junge	8-Sep-03/7:42 PM
I have to agree with nentwined, before you post a poem, read it aloud to yourself. You will find that the flow doesn't exist. Just read it to yourself and try again.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Sep-03/8:14 AM
Very well done, It seems to jump around, but with reason.Thank you
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-03/7:19 PM
I'm not going to get into your Fabio comment line. A fairly discriptive piece. Not too shabby 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-03/7:22 PM
Wow, this one is more erotic than sensuality expressed to me, you pulled it off very well. I want a letter like that! whew
Re: Angelic Fornication by The_Third_Isis	13-Sep-03/7:30 PM
Well, what can I say. Hmm...She sounds really tasty, what with the socks, the skirt, etc. That alone deserves a 10.
Re: Queen Of The Ring by baphomet	13-Sep-03/7:39 PM
O.K. something is wrong here. I can smell it (distant smell of ether.) But still waiting for the continuation, only because I want to know what happened to the queer guy, you know sillygoose. I hope the spread his entrails across three continents, That would make this an interesting read.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/8:48 PM
Well written! I only hope that the sea you spoke of has room for my worries as well, For I would also like to cast them away.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/8:52 PM
How sad. No woman should be treated that way. Abusive men should be taken out behind the barn and force fed their own medicine through the barrel of a 20 guage.Only my opinion of course.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Sep-03/8:55 PM
I have played that game. I'm still waiting. I really liked the 'Zoom in on him' line.
Re: A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades	18-Sep-03/9:05 PM
A note on life perhaps? Not yours I hope.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-03/6:15 PM
Leaves something to be desired,But for the life of me I can't figure out what.