| Re: Isn't it a wonder by caitydee |
8-Jun-04/5:59 AM |
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8-Jun-04/2:13 PM |
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| Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Jun-04/6:38 PM |
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Are you mocking me?! Because I KNOW how to tie my shoes, mistuh man. 8 for the rant but, shouldn't this be on psyche-ranker or maybe Philo-ranker? I dunno.
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| Re: Wedding Day by Caducus |
8-Jun-04/6:50 PM |
first read: swap -noticing and ignoring-
then- with wry misery (he's already exuding)
clambered? I think you mean -clammy?
doomed (seams)?
Um that's enough for now. I see serious problems but I also saw the whole picture, I do like it.
Particularly, arrogant wind and gray expressions sauntering. Work this one, it's worth it.
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8-Jun-04/7:00 PM |
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awfully good. excellent even. I , uh, wow.
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| Re: Turdzilla by Shardik |
9-Jun-04/6:50 AM |
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When is the book supposed to hit the shelves?
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9-Jun-04/6:53 AM |
and still you managed to squeeze more blood from this.
exemplary.
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
9-Jun-04/7:27 AM |
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I hate it when I miss really good stuff like this.
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9-Jun-04/4:34 PM |
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So- As may be better. For a second I though about pink berets. ????? dummy me. I likes.
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| Re: The daisy-chain girl by richa |
10-Jun-04/5:26 AM |
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I'm way off but, my mind went the filthy route first, but on a second read I thought it was about the practice of poetry. A daisy chain being ones older and of lesser quality poems. Damn. Sorry I missed the first cut too. 10 for your poem 6 for me being an idiot.
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| Re: The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco |
10-Jun-04/5:47 AM |
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I want to like this. Especially with the caryatids. Great word ,btw. Just too piecemeal for me. Show me more about the support structures.
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10-Jun-04/3:20 PM |
Shin, nothing personal, puh-leeeze drop the SO. Put a comma at the end of the line and listen. The word -so-
sounds like you don't care about the conversation.
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10-Jun-04/7:09 PM |
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11-Jun-04/6:32 PM |
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In the house, even. *urk*
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27-Jun-04/6:32 PM |
A. This totally kicks ass, and
B. I'm so thankfull you did this because now I can close my books and go back to the brain dead previously scheduled programming of life. Thank you.
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6-Jul-04/11:56 AM |
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Put on a shit eating grin!
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| Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick |
10-Jul-04/3:57 PM |
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rrrrrrrrRRRRRRRIPOFF!!!!!!
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19-Jul-04/7:38 PM |
Gawd. i've got so much reading/catching up to do!
Bravo. I like the undertones.
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20-Jul-04/6:09 AM |
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The only beef I have here is the -she gasps- line. It goes rap-ish on me. I understand the need for the pampers but it seems a little funny. Still not reason enough to diss. Also the fact that it's a two parter adds to the greatness of them. Both should be on the toptwenty in my opinion. Does Mia sample Cheerios in the same fashion as the stick? That is my favorite line. 10*2. And, welcome.
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| Re: Never Ceasing to Amaze by wilco |
20-Jul-04/6:14 AM |
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