| Re: A Cyclamatic Word of Advice by Skamper |
22-Nov-07/1:22 PM |
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I would hate to be the one on the other end of THAT laser. Hey is this website in the UK?
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| Re: A-looky here. by malpaso |
27-Nov-07/3:27 PM |
pov stands for point of view, skamper.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Dec-07/3:56 PM |
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what a superb portrait of a child growing like a tough beautiful flower from the dung of his father's shadow---I loved it!!
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| Re: Milk and gas by Caducus |
27-Dec-07/5:18 PM |
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| Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe |
18-Feb-08/6:40 PM |
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absolutely beautiful! may fallen snow encase me.
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4-Mar-08/4:56 AM |
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excellent picture of the inside-outside dichotomy of the public's obsession with beauty, fame, and personality---lohan is a public creation: image over substance every time. good work!!
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| Re: wam bam by malpaso |
2-May-08/7:44 AM |
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| Re: wam bam by malpaso |
3-May-08/6:27 AM |
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it was an accident...sorry
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Jun-08/7:24 AM |
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I love the rhythm of this poem;it creates suspense. I would,however,use a different verb than 'fling'. Give more power to the co-subject of the poem with something like 'spring'. Other than that small nuance, the imagery is superbly emotive---I give you a 10!Keep writing!
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| Re: sperladnik by malpaso |
10-Jun-08/7:30 PM |
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no one dares comment on the dreaded sperladnik...like the Inquisition, no one expects it.....mmmmbwaaahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
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| Re: Daddy works at the Bank by Skamper |
10-Jun-08/7:38 PM |
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man, that's gross....I love it!!!!!
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| Re: meta ku? what da fuck is dat? by malpaso |
7-Nov-08/6:08 AM |
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this poem sucks, is great, or mediocre at best? gimme some feedback, you who are usually so vocal!
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
13-Nov-08/8:14 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Dec-08/5:29 PM |
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that's the Holocaust for ya. This poem is excellent!!!
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| Re: The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-Jan-09/4:23 PM |
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at least you're not bitter!
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| Re: Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar |
16-Jan-09/5:20 PM |
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loved the part about the berkas and the puddles....enhances the whole theme of timelessness and that kind of subtle power
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| Re: The Project by malpaso |
24-Feb-09/9:27 AM |
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'always'? you mean like everytime you read it? how sweet!!!!
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| Re: The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus |
25-Feb-09/9:35 AM |
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Ah,First World meets Third World....by chance? Excellent work!!
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| Re: Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik |
7-Mar-09/6:40 PM |
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so it sounds like loss of virginity is a disease and a degradation to some uninformed people like this girl who took the extreme way out....funny as hell, O Bear God!!
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| Re: knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
13-Oct-09/9:06 AM |
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gotta say: this poem kicks ass.
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