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17-May-07/1:27 AM |
First Date? LMAO
Excellent, conjures up all sorts!
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| Re: Portrait of the artist as [insert adjective] by Nicholas Jones |
17-May-07/1:31 AM |
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| Re: behind the banister by FreeFormFixation |
17-May-07/1:35 AM |
Chilling.
Lyrical and a little mad.
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| Re: garden spite by skaskowski |
17-May-07/1:37 AM |
Somehow this makes me feel naked.
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17-May-07/1:39 AM |
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That's about the sum of it.
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17-May-07/1:49 AM |
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17-May-07/1:54 AM |
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urgh! I can almost smell it from here...
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| Re: Fraser Allonby Quidnam Cruris by Stephen Robins |
17-May-07/1:56 AM |
LMFAO...So that's who ate all the pies!
Looove this...
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19-May-07/4:09 PM |
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Ah! the substance of true poetry!
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| Re: Bookshop girls by Stephen Robins |
19-May-07/4:15 PM |
Bookshop boys are a tiresome lot
Corduroy trousers
And a spotted bot
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| Re: My Soul Cries Out by amanda_dcosta |
19-May-07/4:21 PM |
There's a lot of this kind of poetry out there - standing out is a challenge.
"And erase those emotions that cause me to
Be disappointed in you."
A clever line - a definate keeper
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19-May-07/4:27 PM |
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| Re: Snow by MacFrantic |
19-May-07/4:31 PM |
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19-May-07/4:35 PM |
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| Re: 1945 by nypoet22 |
20-May-07/6:37 PM |
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| Re: The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina |
22-May-07/3:22 PM |
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Cows will be cows and nothing more - which seemed to irritate the cyclist, to the point of internal dialogue where the cyclist attempts to free them from a fence that obviously doesn't bother the cows, for they have all they need exaclty where they are. Did the cyclist also feel the cows disdain for one who would expand energy so uselessly - as the next hill offers nothing but the same as the last? I like this, and think it needs nothing but the use of imagination in the reader.
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22-May-07/3:29 PM |
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The last three stanzas could possibly stand alone, with a little explanation about photography...I love the last stanza - it speaks a duality - nice!
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24-May-07/11:04 PM |
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rhythmic, as it should be...
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24-May-07/11:12 PM |
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This is either very clever - or just too easy...can't decide yet.
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| Re: C. by skaskowski |
29-May-07/5:52 AM |
"I watched your sideview-mirror split
into a thousand glassy pieces,
like the sparkly spray from
sneezing in the sunlight."
My fav description - and like these lines, movement and colour follows in every thing you've written.
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