Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	15-Mar-07/10:22 AM
Learn to spell. While you're at it, learn to write good poetry.
Re: Junky Dreaming by J.B. Manning	15-Mar-07/10:16 AM
I love the first two lines. The rest... meh.
Re: Blind Settlement by Blindpoetry	15-Mar-07/10:15 AM
I just hate your poetry.
Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry	15-Mar-07/10:14 AM
You're very right: 'Not good - is my expectation!'
Re: When Fairy Tales Forgive Us by J.B. Manning	15-Mar-07/10:13 AM
This could probably be condensed into something vaguely interesting; as it is it's a little long.
Re: No Love by Blindpoetry	15-Mar-07/10:13 AM
You wrote a beautiful song? I'm shocked! Are you capable of such things?
Re: Through Your Frown by Blindpoetry	15-Mar-07/10:12 AM
No wonder you're lonely, your poetry is ass.
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	15-Mar-07/10:10 AM
This is so stupid.
Re: gerbil by betty swallox	15-Mar-07/10:08 AM
The rhyme scheme is a-a-b-b-a. This doesn't fit form, it's a-a-b-b-b. Yeah, and it's not very good.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	15-Mar-07/10:07 AM
very crude.
Re: A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry	14-Mar-07/3:05 PM
Your irritating rhyme scheme makes this nearly unreadable.
Re: Inspire Me by Blindpoetry	14-Mar-07/3:02 PM
Good Lord, this is angsty. Sounds like lyrics for an emo band.
Re: I smell coffee by Princess_Snowflake	14-Mar-07/3:01 PM
grating due to repetition and grammatically incorrect.