| Re: To my Valentine by Lola |
14-Feb-07/6:49 AM |
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| Re: Gilded Lily by drnick |
13-Oct-06/7:25 AM |
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Too many inverted sentences but good cadence.
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| Re: a comment on October by A_Dark_Calm |
13-Oct-06/7:19 AM |
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I don't know I guess because I'm in love I love saying the word love more and love writing love more. Love is a lovely cliche don't you think. Besides, girls love to hear there men do all that love talk. I imagine my poems soon will start sounding like "Love and love went up a love to fetch a pale of love" If so forgive me and blame love.
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| Re: a comment on October by A_Dark_Calm |
13-Oct-06/7:11 AM |
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Trust me I have good reasons but I must stay hush.
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| Re: You by amanda_dcosta |
21-Sep-06/11:05 AM |
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Reminds me of my girlfriend Lola. She's my angel.
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| Re: a comment on Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
5-Sep-06/6:06 AM |
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I must agree with you. It's newly written and needs some polishing. By the way, spot on with the Marlowe reference. I had sent her that very poem just before writing this one. I'm quite impressed Niphredil.
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| Re: a comment on Buttocks. by Ulterius |
4-Sep-06/12:25 AM |
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Looks like your little poem prematurely ejaculated.
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| Re: a comment on Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
4-Sep-06/12:23 AM |
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Good point. 7 aces out of 14 lines ain't too bad (assuming you like the first line as much as the title). It seems my solid images disintegrated with the universe. But you're right about it and I know it.
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| Re: What makes you think I want to know you? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
4-Sep-06/12:09 AM |
Angst you very much for posting your personal problems.
We do love to read about that.
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| Re: a comment on Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
3-Sep-06/11:52 PM |
I could shorten it but then it wouldn't be a sonnet.
Maybe a haiku?
World crashes into sun
The universe soon follows
still with you I live
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| Re: a comment on Let this world crumble to dust without you by A_Dark_Calm |
3-Sep-06/11:48 PM |
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Jesus just called. He told me to tell you you're a butthole.
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| Re: a comment on Covet by creepshow |
3-Sep-06/12:47 PM |
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I am coveting your poem. I'm watching, waiting and someday I may take the opportunity to comment and vote on it.
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| Re: megiddo by ThePariahDog |
3-Sep-06/11:56 AM |
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Megiddo should be capitalized always.
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| Re: Royal Blades by Dovina |
3-Sep-06/6:11 AM |
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Love the way you almost rhyme ice and tights.
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| Re: a comment on Message sent by A_Dark_Calm |
31-Aug-06/2:18 PM |
Good eye me lady! I must have been sleepless the day I posted this. The worst part is I wrote "seem" correctly the very next line up. Thank you for the welcoming. Well I must get some sleep then, Tata.
-always- A_Dark_Calm
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| Re: Ending Well by Dovina |
29-Aug-06/2:20 PM |
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I know guys like this. Wish you'd decide on rhyme or nonrhyme.
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| Re: With Old Light by Ranger |
29-Aug-06/2:11 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Message sent by A_Dark_Calm |
29-Aug-06/1:58 PM |
I was wondering about whether I needed a comma there. Thankya.
The computer reference is sort of a give away.
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