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October (Other) by A_Dark_Calm
October brings such lonely things;
early nights on icy toes,
dead leaves pressed against the road
or in piles that explode
when a bitter gust of wind blows.
Here throughout these 31 days
like a tree losing its leaves
I wait for her and in turn she prays
because my L--- believes
in true love and in destiny,
in miracles and Godâs will.
So I wait for her like that leafless tree
and I wait and I wait for her still.
Her faith has made me sturdy,
her love has kept me warm
and a day has past and left me 30
more before sheâs back at home
and one step closer to my arms.
Once sheâs home come November
sheâll ask to wait a while longer
and somehow Iâll grow stronger
and still on through to December
when love seems to radiate
from the hearth of our hearts
still on and on Iâll wait
and even as the new year starts.
Till spring comes and that lonely tree
spouts leaves so green and wet
Iâll be waiting patiently
until her mind is finally set
and if it takes till summerâs heat
brings sweat upon my brow
I shall not go, shall not retreat
Iâm too deeply rooted now.
Each year by year Iâll hold her nearer
to my heart, my mind, my soul
No matter how our fates unfold
as this man grows older in the mirror
my love for L--- will never wane.
The winds may howl and scream,
clouds may darken and rain
but never will I lose the dream.
No storm can breach us, no distance outreach us
nothing will turn me from you L---
Though I may age, leaves fall, branches lean
through it all my L---
our love is evergreen.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4
Weighted score: 5.286087
Overall Rank: 3733
Posted: October 11, 2006 6:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2006 6:19 PM PDT
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Still a lovely, lovely read :-)