Re: Misplaced Life by Richard	19-Apr-06/2:20 PM
I thought this poem had some depth to the verse. gave me pause.
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	19-Apr-06/2:29 PM
I thought the imagery was very good. I also noted the small edits needed such as (comma after again, before words "my love"), the blossom(s) fell like soft rain, and mis-spelled word incense. I thought this was one of the best poems I've read here.
Re: Sarah's Song by wilco	19-Apr-06/2:33 PM
Contemplative. I liked it.
Re: Im different so what? by xblackstarsx	20-Apr-06/5:36 PM
looks like typos intentional. Childish (meant to be?) I'll stop "now" - instead of no?
Re: 99% of the Time by TLRufener	25-Apr-06/4:38 PM
I really liked this poem. It reminds me of the fact that sometimes "I" can't think of all the things I "want" to stay and this was expressed so well.
Re: I Sleep by Sunny	25-Apr-06/4:45 PM
I didn't really understand the poem I "dissever" from reality (severed)?? discriminate from sin? ramify from heavy flesh?
Re: Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet	25-Apr-06/4:51 PM
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Re: A Taste of Rose by Richard	27-Apr-06/4:54 PM
I liked it, but there are a few lines I think could be stronger -- "too bad, but I think low tide has come" "as this life is sadly tasteless" "Peace maybe forever this time: and I agree the topic has been done (one too many times)
Re: FISH by annadoc	28-Apr-06/4:18 PM
Thought I'd write a cinquain. Shouldn'ta posted, but I did. Why the venom (seething out)?