on Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet
25 Apr 2006, 4:51 PM
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on Sarah's Song by wilco
19 Apr 2006, 2:33 PM
Contemplative. I liked it.
on Misplaced Life by Richard
19 Apr 2006, 2:20 PM
I thought this poem had some depth to the verse. gave me pause.
on Im different so what? by xblackstarsx
20 Apr 2006, 5:36 PM
looks like typos intentional. Childish (meant to be?)
I'll stop "now" - instead of no?
I'll stop "now" - instead of no?
on 99% of the Time by TLRufener
25 Apr 2006, 4:38 PM
I really liked this poem. It reminds me of the fact that sometimes "I" can't think of all the things I "want" to stay and this was expressed so well.
on A Taste of Rose by Richard
27 Apr 2006, 4:54 PM
I liked it, but there are a few lines I think could be stronger -- "too bad, but I think low tide has come"
"as this life is sadly tasteless" "Peace maybe forever this time: and I agree the topic has been done (one too many times)
"as this life is sadly tasteless" "Peace maybe forever this time: and I agree the topic has been done (one too many times)
on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus
19 Apr 2006, 2:29 PM
I thought the imagery was very good. I also noted the small edits needed such as (comma after again, before words "my love"), the blossom(s) fell like soft rain, and mis-spelled word incense. I thought this was one of the best poems I've read here.