on Cloak Of Love by brokenwing
2 Feb 2003, 10:08 PM
All your poemes are about love. Why are so many poemes about love? Do people write poemes about their other obsessive-compulsive disorders? No. Well, they should. It would be good.
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
2 Feb 2003, 9:52 PM
And clowns aren't fucking scary. Skellingtons are.
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
2 Feb 2003, 9:51 PM
Forced does sound the fifth line.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 9:01 PM
Moreover, the bun was never on offer. 'Twas the pie you had a chance at. I behalf this whole pullover has been partible illiberal scone.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 8:22 PM
I do not know whether you are talking to me or to the rascal nentwined. In any event, the bun to which I was referring was an Paris Bun. It was neither honeyed nor a buttock.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 8:16 PM
Did you know I once invented a board game called Facial Justice? It was ace. It was a wond'rous combination of Monopoly, Cluedo, Pictionary, Mouse Trap and Scattergories. A ha, no, I jest. I don't know what the fuck Scattergories is like; I've never played it.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 8:14 PM
An fair point. However, I would urge you to daily read the copy of the International Herald Tribune, which can be found in the Library.
A good day to you.
A good day to you.
replying on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer
2 Feb 2003, 8:05 PM
2. Jesus is the savior whether or not you accept the Teachings of Christianity. And he is the savior whether or not he fell.
3. What is "making your own chains" supposed to mean? Isn't that a metaphor? Or are you talking about some sort of chain-manufacturer?
4. No, I'm saying that it's perfectly possible for someone to be capable of saving others without being capable of saving themselves, even if the idea of saving oneself makes sense.
I do not know whether I am related to VP Dan, since I don't know who the fuck he is. I can't make sense of the previous two utterances since they don't contain a verb.
3. What is "making your own chains" supposed to mean? Isn't that a metaphor? Or are you talking about some sort of chain-manufacturer?
4. No, I'm saying that it's perfectly possible for someone to be capable of saving others without being capable of saving themselves, even if the idea of saving oneself makes sense.
I do not know whether I am related to VP Dan, since I don't know who the fuck he is. I can't make sense of the previous two utterances since they don't contain a verb.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 8:00 PM
How would I know? I don't have one.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 7:50 PM
Yeah, I know he has already had several guns to the head, and, no luck. That's what happens at the University of Life.
You shan't be having the bun. You may have the pie if you complete a questionnaire about Omnibuses.
You shan't be having the bun. You may have the pie if you complete a questionnaire about Omnibuses.
replying on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 7:10 PM
Yes, of course it does, you cock. What the fuck do you think poemes are? They're either rhyming verse or pieces of prose with linebreaks that having confusing parts in so when people read it they don't understand it and think it must therefore be about something "higher" than humans that we weren't supposed to understand, i.e. "beauty".
YOU'VE BEEN TO THE UNIVERSITY OF LIFE AND THEY DIDN'T EVEN FUCKING TEACH YOU THAT? WHEN SOMEONE HOLDS A GUN TO YOUR HEAD YOU'LL LOSE YOUR PRETENTIONS PRETTY FUCKING FAST MISTER. PIE AND A PARIS BUN.
YOU'VE BEEN TO THE UNIVERSITY OF LIFE AND THEY DIDN'T EVEN FUCKING TEACH YOU THAT? WHEN SOMEONE HOLDS A GUN TO YOUR HEAD YOU'LL LOSE YOUR PRETENTIONS PRETTY FUCKING FAST MISTER. PIE AND A PARIS BUN.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 7:09 PM
What the fuck is this? HUH? COOK PASS BABTRIDGE
on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer
2 Feb 2003, 6:59 PM
1. "Savior" is spelled "savior", not "savoir". "Savoir" is the French verb to know.
2. Jesu is the Savior. He never fell.
3. The second, third and fourth verses are complete nonsense. They don't make any sense. They're just random bits of angst that rhyme. Your heart doesn't beat on your spine. That doesn't even make sense as a metaphor.
4. It's perfectly possible to be able to help others but not help oneself. Indeede, one might argue that the idea of helping oneself is buncombe. One does not help oneself to go to the gentleman's chamber. One merely goes. I think you have become confused because of phrases like "Help yourself to some fucking pie." A similar principle applies to being a savior without being a self-savior.
This is a truly bad poeme. The only good part is the hilarious pun in the title. By 'hilarious' I mean 'skdhfajlsdfhlkasjhf'.
2. Jesu is the Savior. He never fell.
3. The second, third and fourth verses are complete nonsense. They don't make any sense. They're just random bits of angst that rhyme. Your heart doesn't beat on your spine. That doesn't even make sense as a metaphor.
4. It's perfectly possible to be able to help others but not help oneself. Indeede, one might argue that the idea of helping oneself is buncombe. One does not help oneself to go to the gentleman's chamber. One merely goes. I think you have become confused because of phrases like "Help yourself to some fucking pie." A similar principle applies to being a savior without being a self-savior.
This is a truly bad poeme. The only good part is the hilarious pun in the title. By 'hilarious' I mean 'skdhfajlsdfhlkasjhf'.
replying on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
2 Feb 2003, 6:52 PM
Acquired immuno-deficiency syndromes.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=1415
Can I be on the list, too?
Can I be on the list, too?
on A Little Nightmare by Teen14
1 Feb 2003, 7:25 AM
Great poeme, Teen14! I especially like your rhymings of "try" with "die", "friend" with "end", and "black" with... "hat". Keep up the good work! 10!!!!!!!!!
I'm afraid it doesn't mean that, Caducus. I thought I told you to think very carefully! Perhaps if I give you a clue you will see the error of your ways?
Consider this: Another word for "incapability" is "inability"
So, your sentence can be rewritten as:
"Forgive me for the inability of being unable to stop."
Now think very carefully about what it means to have the inability of being unable to do something.
Consider this: Another word for "incapability" is "inability"
So, your sentence can be rewritten as:
"Forgive me for the inability of being unable to stop."
Now think very carefully about what it means to have the inability of being unable to do something.
replying on Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w
31 Jan 2003, 7:00 AM
A single tit: you just don't get it, do you?