| Re: Cloak Of Love by brokenwing |
2-Feb-03/10:08 PM |
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All your poemes are about love. Why are so many poemes about love? Do people write poemes about their other obsessive-compulsive disorders? No. Well, they should. It would be good.
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| Re: Coffle by Wulf |
2-Feb-03/10:03 PM |
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| Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar |
2-Feb-03/9:52 PM |
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And clowns aren't fucking scary. Skellingtons are.
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| Re: Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar |
2-Feb-03/9:51 PM |
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Forced does sound the fifth line.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/9:01 PM |
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Moreover, the bun was never on offer. 'Twas the pie you had a chance at. I behalf this whole pullover has been partible illiberal scone.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/8:22 PM |
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I do not know whether you are talking to me or to the rascal nentwined. In any event, the bun to which I was referring was an Paris Bun. It was neither honeyed nor a buttock.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/8:16 PM |
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Did you know I once invented a board game called Facial Justice? It was ace. It was a wond'rous combination of Monopoly, Cluedo, Pictionary, Mouse Trap and Scattergories. A ha, no, I jest. I don't know what the fuck Scattergories is like; I've never played it.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/8:14 PM |
An fair point. However, I would urge you to daily read the copy of the International Herald Tribune, which can be found in the Library.
A good day to you.
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| Re: a comment on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/8:05 PM |
2. Jesus is the savior whether or not you accept the Teachings of Christianity. And he is the savior whether or not he fell.
3. What is "making your own chains" supposed to mean? Isn't that a metaphor? Or are you talking about some sort of chain-manufacturer?
4. No, I'm saying that it's perfectly possible for someone to be capable of saving others without being capable of saving themselves, even if the idea of saving oneself makes sense.
I do not know whether I am related to VP Dan, since I don't know who the fuck he is. I can't make sense of the previous two utterances since they don't contain a verb.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/8:00 PM |
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How would I know? I don't have one.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/7:50 PM |
Yeah, I know he has already had several guns to the head, and, no luck. That's what happens at the University of Life.
You shan't be having the bun. You may have the pie if you complete a questionnaire about Omnibuses.
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| Re: Life by marvelis |
2-Feb-03/7:14 PM |
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Get the fuck out of here. GET OUT OF MY FUCKING CAB.
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| Re: a comment on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/7:10 PM |
Yes, of course it does, you cock. What the fuck do you think poemes are? They're either rhyming verse or pieces of prose with linebreaks that having confusing parts in so when people read it they don't understand it and think it must therefore be about something "higher" than humans that we weren't supposed to understand, i.e. "beauty".
YOU'VE BEEN TO THE UNIVERSITY OF LIFE AND THEY DIDN'T EVEN FUCKING TEACH YOU THAT? WHEN SOMEONE HOLDS A GUN TO YOUR HEAD YOU'LL LOSE YOUR PRETENTIONS PRETTY FUCKING FAST MISTER. PIE AND A PARIS BUN.
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
2-Feb-03/7:09 PM |
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What the fuck is this? HUH? COOK PASS BABTRIDGE
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| Re: Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/6:59 PM |
1. "Savior" is spelled "savior", not "savoir". "Savoir" is the French verb to know.
2. Jesu is the Savior. He never fell.
3. The second, third and fourth verses are complete nonsense. They don't make any sense. They're just random bits of angst that rhyme. Your heart doesn't beat on your spine. That doesn't even make sense as a metaphor.
4. It's perfectly possible to be able to help others but not help oneself. Indeede, one might argue that the idea of helping oneself is buncombe. One does not help oneself to go to the gentleman's chamber. One merely goes. I think you have become confused because of phrases like "Help yourself to some fucking pie." A similar principle applies to being a savior without being a self-savior.
This is a truly bad poeme. The only good part is the hilarious pun in the title. By 'hilarious' I mean 'skdhfajlsdfhlkasjhf'.
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| Re: a comment on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit |
2-Feb-03/6:52 PM |
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Acquired immuno-deficiency syndromes.
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| Re: a comment on As I lay by Katie |
2-Feb-03/10:18 AM |
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| Re: A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/7:25 AM |
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Great poeme, Teen14! I especially like your rhymings of "try" with "die", "friend" with "end", and "black" with... "hat". Keep up the good work! 10!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: a comment on Despair by Caducus |
31-Jan-03/8:53 AM |
I'm afraid it doesn't mean that, Caducus. I thought I told you to think very carefully! Perhaps if I give you a clue you will see the error of your ways?
Consider this: Another word for "incapability" is "inability"
So, your sentence can be rewritten as:
"Forgive me for the inability of being unable to stop."
Now think very carefully about what it means to have the inability of being unable to do something.
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| Re: a comment on Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w |
31-Jan-03/7:00 AM |
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A single tit: you just don't get it, do you?
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