| Re: a comment on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit |
2-Feb-03/6:52 PM |
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Acquired immuno-deficiency syndromes.
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| Re: a comment on As I lay by Katie |
2-Feb-03/10:18 AM |
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| Re: A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/7:25 AM |
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Great poeme, Teen14! I especially like your rhymings of "try" with "die", "friend" with "end", and "black" with... "hat". Keep up the good work! 10!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: a comment on Despair by Caducus |
31-Jan-03/8:53 AM |
I'm afraid it doesn't mean that, Caducus. I thought I told you to think very carefully! Perhaps if I give you a clue you will see the error of your ways?
Consider this: Another word for "incapability" is "inability"
So, your sentence can be rewritten as:
"Forgive me for the inability of being unable to stop."
Now think very carefully about what it means to have the inability of being unable to do something.
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| Re: a comment on Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w |
31-Jan-03/7:00 AM |
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A single tit: you just don't get it, do you?
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| Re: Thursday by w~* ATHENA *~w |
31-Jan-03/6:56 AM |
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Yes, very good! It's not really the heroes that are heroes, but the people with disabilities who are heroes. Because their heroism isn't in the finger that pulls the trigger, or the foot that kicks someone in the groin, or the entire body that flies an F-19 stealth fighter straight into someone's face. It's in their hearts. It's in their souls. And it's in their hideously contorted facial expressions. Besides, I doubt most of them are even capable of pulling a trigger, let alone comprehending what the strange metallic object they hold in their hands is actually for. 10/10!
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
31-Jan-03/6:26 AM |
"Forgive me for the incapability of being unable to stop."
I want you to think very carefully about the meaning of that line, then ask yourself this
"Oh Christ! What have I done?"
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| Re: a comment on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar |
29-Jan-03/4:42 PM |
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Yeah - they're both meanies. Don't they realise life is a game?
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| Re: a comment on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar |
29-Jan-03/4:41 PM |
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I like the way you've managed to spell three words wrong in a five-word sentence.
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| Re: a comment on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-Jan-03/5:56 AM |
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OH JESU WHAT HAVE I BECOME?
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| Re: Guilt by Freethinker1602 |
29-Jan-03/4:35 AM |
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Why are all your poemes so racist? Black people have just as much right to bask on this planet as you or I. But you won't even let them come out at night to feed. How dare you!?
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| Re: a comment on Guilt by Freethinker1602 |
29-Jan-03/3:29 AM |
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It means you're in way over your head, kid. My advice to you would be to get out before you freak out. I think you catch my drift...
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| Re: a comment on (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined |
28-Jan-03/6:02 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
28-Jan-03/12:45 AM |
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She's 52, she looks like a raisin and her name is Ambyr Nyghtfyre.
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| Re: a comment on Longing by galiana |
28-Jan-03/12:37 AM |
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That sounds like a great idea!!!!1
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| Re: Longing by galiana |
28-Jan-03/12:15 AM |
LOL YOU POSTED A POEME CALLED 'LONGING' RIGHT AFTER SOMEONE ELSE DID.
THIS IS TERRIBLE.
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| Re: Everything & Nothing by aperfecttool77 |
28-Jan-03/12:12 AM |
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| Re: Melancholy Tale by aperfecttool77 |
28-Jan-03/12:10 AM |
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How is this a poeme? All you've done is written some prose and then added a line break after every clause. I'm sure you'll be a popular poete in no time!!!! 10
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
26-Jan-03/2:13 PM |
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heh yeah fuck I wrote the fucker after I'd snorted a fuck load of bad fucking shit fuck
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| Re: a comment on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar |
26-Jan-03/7:51 AM |
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It's not an insult. It's a Cack-Wagon. In any case, 'cack' is a word completely unknown to Americans, who also have no idea how funny they sound when they say they're wearing 'khaki pants'.
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