| Re: Money Back by drnick |
22-Jun-06/10:49 PM |
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Hmmmmm. I like the last two lines that sum up the first six lines . Other than that I ain't relating much to it although I get the scene. Sorry to disappoint.
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| Re: a comment on My secret to life by amanda_dcosta |
22-Jun-06/10:44 PM |
Wow Nick... Thanks and good to see you back. I've asked Jesus whether he likes you.... and he says.... as always!
Where have you been and how are you? :-)
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
22-Jun-06/5:17 AM |
That's not fair Ranger. While you guys take on the world cup, poor us who are non athlethic have to take on poemranker, struggling to give it a lift. :-)
Spare a hand here... won't you, plz.
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| Re: a comment on The Third Fall Of Jesus by amanda_dcosta |
21-Jun-06/1:11 AM |
Edna, thankyou for your precious time. I'm honoured. And the vote too.
Whether it's funny/ a joke /or serious, I see that you've already voted. So, it makes no difference to explain myself.
And if you want to plagiarise it all you want, then go ahead. Feel free. Give vent to all your frustration and pent up emotions and anger. Feel free. That's why my poems are here for you as long as you take the time to read it. That's all that matters... that my stuff be read. What you do with it is your problem, not mine.
And P.S. I ain't scared of your crap, and it ain't contagious to me or doesn't affect me one bit. So as long as you understand that, I'll be looking out for you to read and comment my poems. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time.
So, till then, nice knowing you!
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| Re: a comment on slice of moonlight by lmp |
20-Jun-06/9:48 AM |
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You bet! From what I read, you have one. Any more kids?
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
20-Jun-06/4:26 AM |
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Thank you.... I take this as a compliment. Hmmmm.... Let's see what I can cook up.
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
19-Jun-06/7:32 PM |
Al.... you heard that?
And RAnger..... how are you. You don't seem to be having much time around lately. Hope to see you back in top form soon.
As for the God-existence topic.... I don't think anyone ever gets tired of it. So many theories about existence and non-existence that people are really forgetting what's important.....love and life.
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| Re: slice of moonlight by lmp |
19-Jun-06/8:10 AM |
Beautiful.... This got straight to my heart.
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| Re: If I Had by forsaken |
18-Jun-06/11:21 PM |
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| Re: Be The One by forsaken |
18-Jun-06/11:20 PM |
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Looks like you're a loser at love that you're poems are written to beckon someone in particular. It doesn't seem that you've got her. (No offence meant).
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| Re: A Love Potion by forsaken |
18-Jun-06/11:18 PM |
A nice title. And a good read.
But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.
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| Re: My Ideals by Miggy |
18-Jun-06/11:14 PM |
This is a good.
.................And to see that none have voted here yet?
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| Re: The Runt by Caducus |
18-Jun-06/11:11 PM |
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Cool. Whether real or not, the choice of topic is good. It's like you've put a story to it. Great job.
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| Re: The Last of The Winds by emilyowey |
18-Jun-06/11:07 PM |
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Its a nice idea but ends in being an okay-okay poem.
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| Re: Field Of Surnames by Caducus |
18-Jun-06/11:04 PM |
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Somehow I get the feeling of being in a cemetary.
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| Re: End by MacFrantic |
18-Jun-06/10:55 PM |
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I fell that this could be an excerpt from a story. somehow it gives me an eerie feeling. I don't particularly like death themes esp when settled around brutality.
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
17-Jun-06/9:02 PM |
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Okay..... do you mean Edna Sweetlove?
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
17-Jun-06/8:59 PM |
I don't seem to find Sweetlove in the user list. Give me one of her/his poems.... to find on search
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
17-Jun-06/10:46 AM |
Dovina..., if I'm right, I sense a bit of disappointment in you...probably you expected a bit more response from me. Sorry.
But I was so tired in the afternoon when I logged in and commented. I'm up very early as my kids have to dress, eat and leave for school too very early. School bus doesn't wait.
And honestly, I like seeing you around my pages. Kinda nice to know you read my stuff.
As for 'the hand that's marvellous....hat', it's just an image which is reasonable reference for what one can relate to. Ithought it fitted in well.
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| Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta |
17-Jun-06/12:04 AM |
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