regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-05/2:14 PM
hmm...did it get my post? I hit submit, and it took me back to vote again...so will give it a 10 again! I hope you get my previous comment!
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-05/2:34 PM
I love how you said this. I really do like it, but can't give you a high score for content alone, (or it would be a high one!) I am horrible at punctuation usage, but...want my suggestion?!, get someone to help you sort out the punctuation and complete sentences, and capitalization on this! Maybe consider no punctuation , nor capitalization. Or all first words beginning with capitals. The format would work without punctuation. If I ignored the punctuation, it read excellently. You have real potential if you ask me! Thanks for sharing...and for God's sake keep writing!
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-05/2:42 PM
This started out pretty good, but then fell apart. Besides that...you really need to get help with punctuation! Not as good as the others I have read by you, (by far) Sorry. My favorite parts> magnificence, perfected, and purified... and... the incessant longing for the unnattainable, pure torture for the human soul. (to/for my human soul?)
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-05/2:49 PM
that burns brighter and dances at the sound of your name. I read it as> that burns brighter and dances to the sound of your name. I kinda prefer "to". Other than that..if you want a subjective opinion, which I gather you do, since you posted it...It just didn't grab me, or move me, or make me think. It was sweet, and I am sure your love at the time adored it, but to me, it was a little sappy. >perfection is shone.: didn't work well in the rythm...uhm...no...sorry...just not doing it for me.
Re: Why I Bother by empire942	13-Jul-05/2:54 PM
Sorry...I wonder WHY you posted this without a simple edit job...man...spelling, periods wherever, and not an original thought in there...boring, and not saying much.
Re: Only I wish I could say.. by PunkyPanda	13-Jul-05/3:03 PM
I am thinking you are young...keep writing, this is sweet and a look into young-ness. I give you credit for correct spelling...not one mistake! (which is more than I can say about a lot of people who post! (Other than> 'outwith'...but I figured a typo!) You got too wordy in places> 'before in my fears I drown.'& 'I, which you will ban'. My advise is to write as you speak, as you hear it said in your head...let it just flow as-is, then clean it up and work on anything that doesn't work.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jul-05/10:00 PM
What a weird little bit of whimsy! The reference to beery bladder kinda grossed me out...uhm...this is the strangest thing I have read in a long time...hmmmm....I like the line "and revel buoyant", and the last stanza...cool rythm to it.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jul-05/10:02 PM
What?! I am speechless...how could you two give this an 8 and a 10?! What in the heck am I not seeing here?!...never mind...I totally disagree, for the record!
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jul-05/10:09 PM
Ugh...I have a feeling you had something you really wanted to say with this...but it got lost in there somewhere...everywhere. An evolution genius> An evolutionary genius. I LIKE the thought that if a man fucks another he succeeds in only raping his own ego. It is a worthwhile thing to talk about...the middle stanza is all over the place...and the whole thing is unclear, throughout.
Re: Showtime by INTRANSIT	26-Jul-05/10:14 PM
man! This actually got my attention, as I kept on reading, and then you dropped the ball! CHOP! END> Nothing...it fell on its face! finish the thought here...you were rambling on with a story, that must have been leading somewhere...finish it!
Re: Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17	26-Jul-05/10:16 PM
hmmm...kinda cool!
Re: Polar Bearings by impert&ent	26-Jul-05/10:22 PM
YESss! Woo-Hoo!!!!! Two thumbs up!
Re: Worth by Dovina	26-Jul-05/10:27 PM
hmmm....cool...though you lost me on stanza 3.
Re: Noble oboe now sings every next saturday evening by ALChemy	26-Jul-05/10:32 PM
I thought the use of 'upon the Moonbeam Starship Satellite" a little long-winded..and ? unclear...otherwise I like it. I was thinking...> upon the moonbeamed__________ (something).
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	26-Jul-05/10:35 PM
Here, Here! What fun! Thanks for sharing!
Re: A thank you note(Not a poem at all) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jul-05/10:44 PM
Dearest pinkbunnyofDOOM...just an observation...you start out saying you don't care...but the fact that you responded, and at length, contradicts that assertion. (Along with the fact that you find it disturbing, albiet, at the slightest.) I don't know the politics going on behind this post...and don't care to. I would share, however, that I find a strange sense of disturbing satisfaction at the thought that this site is set up to observe behaviour and writing, and perhaps writers...and if I were the observer, I would be quite amused....oh, wait, I AM an observer...and I am...(quite amused.)
Re: Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp	26-Jul-05/10:48 PM
LMAO...wow...what fun non-sense...can't give it a high score, though it was good for a chuckle. You have a strange sense of humor...one I see in more than a few unique friends of mine.
Re: Hindsight by darby pyn	26-Jul-05/10:57 PM
Man...I am putting this on my fav list...what a wretchedly real piece...I smelled it, tasted it, saw it from my hiding place in the corner, watching it unfold...vile stuff and real stuff...and I rose with you when you came out the other side! Awesome, awesome job!
Re: Revisiting Old Wounds by ObiWonKn	31-Jul-05/6:23 AM
Are you at the church, near a concert you missed, or couldn't get to?...some public event you are sad you couldn't be a part of? Is this about the Hunchback of Notre Dame, when he missed the OzzieFest? This would actually be pretty good, if you told us that specifically. The beginning is great, sets the scene, paints the picture...and then we say, "Huh?" with a puzzled look on our faces.I would have given this a higher score, had you cleared up the ending.
Re: The Worst Poem Ever Created (edited) by drnick	31-Jul-05/6:29 AM
I went to see what the links were, that Zodic posted..and yep! the 1st, 3rd, and 4th were right up there! Sorry drnick, it wasn't the worst poem ever written, but it comes close! (So, how do I vote? A high score would imply this is good? Or would imply it is the worst?) I think I will rank it for the worst...that is what my score will reflect!)