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Why I Bother (Lyric) by empire942
Is this just a game too you? Breaking me down only to build me up aging to break. Nothing can take back the shit youve done! Breaking down, Im breaking down. (Chorus) Tell me why I bother, tell me why i care Whey do I lay awake at night thinking of you why do i lose sleep over you. WHY! Feeling like i need to break away from it all you take me down just to let me resurface I dont understand what happened to the person i use to know. (Chorus) Tell me why I bother, tell me why i care Whey do I lay awake at night thinking of you why do i lose sleep over you. WHY! Breaking down on the inside! Cutting Though and Though! Just tell me why i Bother! WHY.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.282823
Overall Rank: 13146
Posted: July 13, 2005 4:03 AM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2005 4:03 AM PDT
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[1] LilMsLadyPoet @ 64.12.116.135 | 13-Jul-05/2:54 PM | Reply
Sorry...I wonder WHY you posted this without a simple edit job...man...spelling, periods wherever, and not an original thought in there...boring, and not saying much.
[5] http://bandgeek @ 216.195.164.111 | 15-Jul-05/8:11 PM | Reply
I stay awake at night thinking about whey too, when I am not thinking of bulgar or tempeh or grape tomatoes or heartbreak.
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