Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:38 PM
You still amaze me with the poetry in your comments. Ace.
Re: a comment on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:34 PM
It may or may not be but at least I minimize my crap compared to some of the pretentious, hellacious dumps you've taken. You bore me. I must go to work now.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:27 PM
Tell me what you've got when you take a belligerent twat and mix her with an uptight swot? By God you have got another form of TWOTT.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:22 PM
Well, I guess you got me there.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:18 PM
How about "TWOTT". That one's brand spanking new.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:16 PM
Any style of poetry with the prefix Neo in front of it. Jack Kerouac wrote Haikus.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/7:13 PM
I bet I've written more topical poetry than you. I bet I've said more with less words than you also. I don't mind that you don't have much flexability in your poetry. I rate poetry for what it is. I may not like Jazz but I don't go around saying your music sucks because it's Jazz.
Re: a comment on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/6:53 PM
Ya know I almost titled it "The Solar Eclipse" but I didn't want to confuse the meaning of the poem with something that wasn't stormy. (See my explanation above)
Re: a comment on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/6:49 PM
Never?: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=106747 The moon is not the child, the sun is. The moon is me. The sun is my niece. Her parents are on the verge of divorce. Her and her brother just found out today and I spent the day consoling them while their parents yelled at each other in the other room. The Sun and moon metaphor is a continuation of the one in this poem: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=136338
Re: a comment on My Prayer by amanda_dcosta	28-Mar-06/5:36 PM
Shameless of me, wasn't it?
Re: a comment on Buddy by ALChemy	28-Mar-06/5:15 PM
It'll come to you soon enough. You'll see your symbol somewhere in something.
Re: My Prayer by amanda_dcosta	28-Mar-06/10:59 AM
Here's my challenge to you: Write a poem about God that never overtly mentions him or anything else that would be directly linked to the bible. Use metaphor or whatever you can think of to make it work. Here's an example: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=141306 I promise it will make your book that much better.
Re: a comment on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0	28-Mar-06/10:46 AM
Of course you're not. In fact you're a "26(?) year old, intelligent, long haired, bohemian rhapsody currently living in a small hut just outside of Hastings, England. I don't work. I am not a conformist. I, like you, am artist, dreamer and revolutionary. Good looking fella, long blond hair, tats and piercings, likes horny girls." Which is all the more reason you should like campbellsoupgrl09. Why not put on some of that English charm we hear about in the states all the time. You don't always have to be Sid Vicious.
Re: a comment on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton	28-Mar-06/8:10 AM
Only if you "sqoeeze" your eyes real tight.
Re: a comment on Buddy by ALChemy	27-Mar-06/11:34 AM
Now you're both it seeem.
Re: a comment on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0	27-Mar-06/11:31 AM
Don't bother with him. He's uptight, British and a hypocrite. He's on a mission to change the worlds view of English people as intellectuals.
Re: a comment on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton	27-Mar-06/11:08 AM
Yes, your spelling and punctuation on the other hand is impeccable.
Re: a comment on Buddy by ALChemy	27-Mar-06/6:55 AM
You're styll one, M'i llits eht rehto.
Re: A Fish is Always a Fish by Dovina	27-Mar-06/12:44 AM
"-and I shall make you fishers of men." -Some dude.
Re: a comment on Buddy by ALChemy	27-Mar-06/12:35 AM
Maybe I should convert to Islam. Allah is so much easier for a dyslexic. I suppose I could refer to the Christian god as "Am I that, am I?" or pronounce Jesus as Sausage but that's a mouthful or maybe I could put on my Sean-Johns and walk up to the lord like "Yo, what up Dog?"