Re: while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit	25-Sep-02/7:14 PM
'Your name scrawled three thousand times across my walls' is marvelous.
Re: You don't know me by toredikt	25-Sep-02/7:15 PM
I'm going to assume you meant 'the only reasonable thing'.
Re: glory bar realities by royalflesh	25-Sep-02/7:17 PM
The Jesus parts make it wonderful. Not so sure about the rest.
Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart	25-Sep-02/7:20 PM
I wouldn't mind the single line so much if you spelt well. Please tell me that 'houlisanating' wasn't just a typo, but supposed to mean something.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/7:24 PM
Brilliant. I also agree. Kids today are far too coddled. Damn political correctness to the seventh circle of hell.
Re: Taffy by knickytoy	25-Sep-02/7:29 PM
Is candy all you ever talk about?
Re: Best Friends by Chels85	25-Sep-02/7:31 PM
Too many exclamation marks, among other things. Far too many. Especially since they're useless.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/7:35 PM
'My "Hap"'? What the hell is a hap?
Re: Fall by morffrom	25-Sep-02/9:04 PM
'Mists and frosts rhyme' is damn good. The rest leaves to be desired.
Re: Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi	25-Sep-02/9:21 PM
I have to agree that it drifts a little before the rolling off of the names, which is a stunning moment. What can I say, your long post talking about your village actually moved me more than most of the poem did. 'For, how many, which' was wonderful. And Poetandknowit, I must ask if you have read this poem in the original language, and if so if you understand that original language, before you go saying that's it's no good in that language.
Re: All because of you by Artificial_Sweetner	25-Sep-02/9:54 PM
Why does your pain amuse us so much? Because it's so paltry, boring, cliched, misspelt and amusing. That's all, Stacey dear, that's all.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/10:00 PM
Hmmm... I feel ambiguous about this one. It's as if I want to like it but for some reason can't quite.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/8:38 PM
As usual, I love what you saying, and adore the images. I just can't bring myself to like the form. It annoys me, because I want to like it so much, but I just can't.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/8:40 PM
Not bad. Not bad at all, even.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/10:35 AM
I love the first line, but the second lets it down.
Re: Confused by planetdicko	3-Oct-02/10:37 AM
Too many exclamations marks.
Re: one word by Blade	3-Oct-02/10:39 AM
Yup. That's only one word all right.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/10:39 AM
Mmm, tasty! can I have one too?
Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones	3-Oct-02/10:41 AM
You could be something other than gloomy. Nights like that are beautiful. Oh, wait, this is suburbia. All right, all you could be is gloomy. You're quite right.
Re: #16 by mikejedw	3-Oct-02/10:45 AM
This question has been asked for centuires, and formulated much better than you do.