Re: The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana	3-Oct-02/10:50 AM
I don't want to sound nasty, but I'm rooting for the stalker, myself.
Re: Funny Thought by phbiscuit	3-Oct-02/10:52 AM
This is 1)wonderful, 2)quite a realistic view of what goes through a dying person's mind. Bravo.
Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner	3-Oct-02/10:56 AM
Not sure I like it that, but the first stanza's quite good.
Re: When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes	3-Oct-02/10:57 AM
Awww... baby raven...
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/11:02 AM
You are a descent girl. I'm not quite sure WHAT you're descended from, though.
Re: Hearts End by grrund	3-Oct-02/11:04 AM
All right, I can see that you needed a rhyme for 'road', but 'toad' really is pushing it a bit, don't you think?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Oct-02/9:00 PM
What do you know, you've again proved yourself a genius. But then what else is new?
Re: one is leaving as i enter by Limness	8-Oct-02/12:12 PM
Because you're attracted to them. Admit it. You like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/12:17 PM
Lovely. For once I like images, message AND form. 'The phoenix does rise' irked me for a moment (it seems so cliched for you to use), but you save it with the next line.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/12:20 PM
Not bad, not bad at all. Since you hate typos, I'll permit myself two notes: hesitations not nesitiations, and hers not her's.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/12:26 PM
Not my favourite of yours. It's not that it's necessarily bad, it's just that for some reason I wouldn't put it in a personal book of favourites. As for the use of 'menstruating' (seeing as it seems to be the big issue -- or at least one of them), it does seem to be a tad out of place, but you get used to it. Not that it can't be used in a poem, I just didn't feel it quite fit this one. But what the devil, we'll assume you know what you're doing (when there's no shaggable male in the vicinity).
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/12:27 PM
I like. I like a lot.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/12:30 PM
'Wrecking ball' takes a half second to work. 'Takes no holidays' a bit longer, because it seems a bit out of place, but it works in the end. The 'I know your...' bits are excellent.
Re: Trying to say by persephone6358	8-Oct-02/12:36 PM
Dear gods. I cannot imagine why Hades would ever want to steal you away. I think I'll go warn him.
Re: It's time you get here by devina	8-Oct-02/12:45 PM
I think it's time you get out of your house and start looking. Yeeshus.
Re: why i look like a man by rosiebailey	8-Oct-02/1:01 PM
Either you're a genius like -=Dark_Angel=- or else you're an utter idiot. The jury's still out.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/1:03 PM
There you go. What's 'mujer', by the way? I understand the rest of the Spanish, but I don't actually speak the language and haven't a dictionary handy.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Oct-02/6:39 PM
Dare one ask for the percentage of poems you find that actually suit? I confess I've never read such a lovely poem about a website before.
Re: Sisters of mercy by strider1	9-Oct-02/11:23 AM
Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. By the way, just because a line has ended does not mean it requires a comma.
Re: A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator	9-Oct-02/5:25 PM
Yes... yes... she does rather deserve better than you. Rather. Actually, I don't know the lady. Maybe she does deserve you. But if that's so, I can't imagine what she did in a past life. Poor thing.