regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-02/7:48 PM
Nice, nice. However, the pay phone seems a sudden break that doesn't match. The first three stanzas are wonderful (the first is particularly delicious) and the final one wonderfully evocative. But hte pay phone doesn't seem to match the other images -- thoguh I see its purpose.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Oct-02/9:10 PM
I admit I really like the idea.
Re: Happy hour by flatliner	12-Oct-02/9:12 PM
Altar, AltAr, ALTAR!!! Why the hell can'T people figure out it's spelt with a second 'a'? Yeezhus. (Sorry, sorta. I've seen a lot of this in poems lately.)
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-Oct-02/8:57 PM
Ah, -=Dark_Angel=-! You always post such wondrous, sheer, unadulterated shit. (I'm assuming you'll take this as a compliment.)
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-02/11:35 AM
Not bad in the slightest. The first time I read it, I thought it might work work if you inversed the final two lines, but on rereading it I noticed it works fine as it is.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-02/11:52 AM
I'm not sure if I like it as much anymore. (And what I meant in my earlier comment was 'it might work better', not 'it might work work')
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-02/11:56 AM
''Twas' doesn't seem to fit.
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-02/11:57 AM
'The horizon/Untouched/Hangs/Ivory tusks' is wonderful.
Re: Choices by Ojiboch	16-Oct-02/6:47 AM
Ouch. My brain is hurting.
Re: like love in the movies by crin	16-Oct-02/6:47 AM
I'll hope the music to this is good. It might just save it.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/6:49 AM
Aww, how sweet. Good to know you're going.
Re: Ashes by Mutant_X	16-Oct-02/6:54 AM
The last two stanzas ruin a not too bad first one. Especially the last one.
Re: Dying for a Dowry by Blue Magpie	16-Oct-02/7:01 AM
Humanity hasn't sunk this low, it's simply always been this low and never risen higher.
Re: a genius by moonUnit	16-Oct-02/7:03 AM
The ending is so damn boring...
Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin	16-Oct-02/11:12 AM
This is not bad at all. Just one little thing -- you come out the house, turn around the corner, look at him, drive off -- wait a minute, when did you get into the car?
Re: The Way It Is by Tascobar	16-Oct-02/11:20 AM
'Spoken without thought'? My foot. If it's spoken without thought, then it's not a taunt. It's a spoken thought. Taunts are thought up and used deliberatly. Like what I'm saying now.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/5:42 PM
I assume that's 'Seldom' (third from last line).
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/5:47 PM
K??dresh be right... it is 'aphrodIsiac'. If you're going to edit these to remove all previous votes, limonade sweetheart, why not take the opportunity to fix those tiny, rare, ever-so-occasional typos? Just wondering. I still adore the first line. Oh, and the rest is excellent too.
Re: ~*Broken Soul*~ by Katie	16-Oct-02/6:15 PM
Giveme one single, good, understandable and worthwhile argument for the addition of those ridiculous tildes and asterixes in the title. Just one.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/6:31 PM
-=Dark_Angel=- shall be proud...