Free verse № 20141

Ashes

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Oct 2002 · 1 comment

cleaning my closet i'm sweeping the ashes of my childhood gettin rid of the silly old memories gatherin the small colorfull books and burning the fairy tales inside me walkin down a road not knowin where it leads it takes courage to give up everything and take the big risk voices i will always miss memories i will never forget, no matter how i try things i will never give up it's my childhood

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[3] Tintagiles 16-Oct-02/6:54 AM Reply

The last two stanzas ruin a not too bad first one. Especially the last one.