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Ashes (Free verse) by Mutant_X cleaning my closet
i'm sweeping the ashes of my childhood
gettin rid of the silly old memories
gatherin the small colorfull books
and burning the fairy tales inside me
walkin down a road
not knowin where it leads
it takes courage
to give up everything
and take the big risk
voices i will always miss
memories i will never forget,
no matter how i try
things i will never give up
it's my childhood
Up the ladder:
When Heaven Is Hell
Down the ladder:
Saviour
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Posted: October 13, 2002 2:58 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2002 2:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11804 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.92
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16-Oct-02/6:54 AM
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The last two stanzas ruin a not too bad first one. Especially the last one.
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