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Ashes (Free verse) by Mutant_X

cleaning my closet i'm sweeping the ashes of my childhood gettin rid of the silly old memories gatherin the small colorfull books and burning the fairy tales inside me walkin down a road not knowin where it leads it takes courage to give up everything and take the big risk voices i will always miss memories i will never forget, no matter how i try things i will never give up it's my childhood

Tintagiles 16-Oct-02/6:54 AM
The last two stanzas ruin a not too bad first one. Especially the last one.




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