| Re: Dancing against the rain by Corey McHattan |
28-Aug-02/3:52 PM |
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29-Aug-02/2:27 AM |
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keybored ?- otherwise good-8/10
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29-Aug-02/2:52 AM |
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4-Sep-02/3:25 AM |
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This is a stronger piece than your others
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4-Sep-02/3:29 AM |
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4-Sep-02/3:31 AM |
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Not as good as you other longer one I'm afraid-6/10
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| Re: Leaf on the wind by troll454 |
7-Sep-02/7:43 AM |
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Almost haiku like at the end
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| Re: Little lady by dolores |
21-Sep-02/4:55 AM |
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This is incisive and so true-nicely put-9/10
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| Re: Fall by morffrom |
21-Sep-02/5:02 AM |
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
21-Sep-02/5:06 AM |
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I think this is great, simple words like gin and bourbon and wine, now where have I heard that kind of thing before- Mr Babitt
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| Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness |
21-Sep-02/7:01 AM |
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Absinthe makes the heart glow longer
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30-Sep-02/12:21 AM |
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| Re: Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit |
30-Sep-02/12:49 AM |
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I enjoyed it and thought it made sense until ..exploring into the late hours...8/10
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30-Sep-02/12:55 AM |
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A stroke of genius or the emperor's new clothes ? I'll give you the benefit Hans- 7/10
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| Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom |
30-Sep-02/5:15 AM |
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Not sure this works, prbably because the spring is no longer in
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| Re: Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom |
30-Sep-02/5:17 AM |
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You get a much better class of conversation with a clock. What does promiscuous vacuity mean ?
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| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
4-Oct-02/12:50 AM |
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