| Re: Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
16-Oct-04/9:05 PM |
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| Re: a comment on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
16-Oct-04/8:54 PM |
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Also,this Meta-ku, as you call it, certainly does deserve the zero you've given it, but just because you couldn't wash your dirty little mouth out for 2 seconds to say "this sucked", I'll give it a 10, just out of spite.
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| Re: a comment on I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
16-Oct-04/8:49 PM |
1. I probably should take it upon myself to actually know what it is I'm writing, or attempting to write.
2. I've no male genitalia with which to "funnel".
3. I live in the U.S. of A. and one of the beautiful things about it is the privaledge to do whatever the hell I want.
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| Re: I hate Haiku's. Bombs away. by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
16-Oct-04/8:13 PM |
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I really, really hate Haiku's. This is my first one ever. Tell me, public, does this Haiku pass as standable?
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| Re: the monster by oneglove |
16-Oct-04/8:08 PM |
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If only God took time from his "busy" schedule to read. :) I like it.
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| Re: Yeah, Maybe by Blindpoetry |
16-Oct-04/7:58 PM |
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You could call this one a lyrical too, no? Yea, I'd buy this single.
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| Re: Archivist of Emotion by Dovina |
16-Oct-04/7:55 PM |
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Hah, I like the title most of all. -9-
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| Re: Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17 |
16-Oct-04/7:52 PM |
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I love a good rhyming scheme :)
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| Re: a comment on Damn you, Feeling. by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
16-Oct-04/7:49 PM |
16. (junior in HS)
But with all the drama, it seems I should be older.
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| Re: Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-Oct-04/5:27 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
13-Oct-04/7:41 PM |
Yea, it was written about an sexually abusive father. What would you suggest to fix the line?
P.S. Thanks :D
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| Re: puff by Torok |
13-Oct-04/7:33 PM |
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| Re: Angst by Mikius |
13-Oct-04/7:21 PM |
"But not as bad as my heart.
Which is infinitely pained.
And tortured."
Dug that. -7-
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| Re: Shattered by Aetius |
13-Oct-04/7:18 PM |
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Wooooah. Dig it, man. Dig it. This is the first Haiku I've ever read in my life...that I actually liked. 10 for me.
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| Re: a comment on A Reflective Window by lukehanney |
10-Oct-04/8:05 AM |
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I agree, I'm usually not a fan of long poems but this was certainly worth reading twice.
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| Re: Feast On Me by cuddlytiger17 |
10-Oct-04/7:53 AM |
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What is a "pimple" anyways? I mean, what makes it different from free verse, etc.?
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| Re: Cast Iron Coffin by D. $ Fontera |
10-Oct-04/7:51 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
10-Oct-04/7:45 AM |
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Oh yea, thanks, I'll fix that.
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| Re: It by fevriere |
9-Oct-04/7:48 AM |
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