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Angst (Free verse) by Mikius
Angst. Torturing my mind with pain. Like a thousand people, Being tortured. Painfully. Painfully tortured. Like my soul. Which is also tortured. And painful. Wrapped in torturous pain. But not as bad as my heart. Which is infinitely pained. And tortured. Painful. Pain. -Fin-

Up the ladder: Feast On Me
Down the ladder: the Dreamer

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7919
Posted: October 13, 2004 8:42 AM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2004 8:42 AM PDT
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[7] Rollsoftoiletpaper @ 205.188.117.13 | 13-Oct-04/7:21 PM | Reply
"But not as bad as my heart.
Which is infinitely pained.
And tortured."
Dug that. -7-
[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 17-Feb-06/3:21 PM | Reply
I sincerely hope this was meant to amuse, because I had to chuckle at it. Knowing you, I think it was!
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