| Re: hurt by yOum|n |
28-Aug-04/2:09 AM |
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sometimes i feel this way too. good.
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| Re: Masculine by temptalia |
28-Aug-04/2:07 AM |
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nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.
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| Re: this one is for Jon by tstormer |
28-Aug-04/2:05 AM |
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| Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry |
28-Aug-04/2:05 AM |
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| Re: Your Great by scitz |
28-Aug-04/2:04 AM |
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| Re: Broken by psychedelic |
28-Aug-04/2:00 AM |
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
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| Re: Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn |
28-Aug-04/1:57 AM |
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"
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| Re: a comment on solitude by darylchew |
27-Aug-04/10:28 PM |
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thank you for the comments. i'll take note and improve. anyway this is only my first poem! ><
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