Poemranker [20 most recent comments by darylchew (41-60) and replies]

Comments bydarylchew, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on hurt by yOum|n 28 Aug 2004, 2:09 AM

sometimes i feel this way too. good.

on Masculine by temptalia 28 Aug 2004, 2:07 AM

nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.

on this one is for Jon by tstormer 28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM

weird. not good.

on Just A Dream by Blindpoetry 28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM

true.

on Your Great by scitz 28 Aug 2004, 2:04 AM

...reminds me of her.

on Broken by psychedelic 28 Aug 2004, 2:00 AM

feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.

on Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn 28 Aug 2004, 1:57 AM

i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.

but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"

replying on solitude by darylchew 27 Aug 2004, 10:28 PM

thank you for the comments. i'll take note and improve. anyway this is only my first poem! ><