| Re: a comment on Privacy by Dovina |
16-Dec-05/10:34 AM |
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There's a gay line in it, but the rest is aimed at the absurdity of "privacy" as many people view it - something lost. Now may I please have a nice comment?
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| Re: a comment on War (edit) by zodiac |
15-Dec-05/2:37 PM |
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Will you read and comment on my latest poem, I mean really comment, if I take out the "not"?
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
15-Dec-05/2:34 PM |
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No, half-baked ideas are always good, and might turn into fully-baked good ideas. So don't throw them out just because they're half-baked.
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| Re: a comment on The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus |
15-Dec-05/2:31 PM |
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You're saying that because I said I like it.
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| Re: a comment on CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY by amanda_dcosta |
15-Dec-05/2:30 PM |
1. They're related
2. Wrong
3. Brown is not bad, but I'm not, and full has nothing to do with it.
4. Bicycling, loving, cooking canned food, eating chips. Score 5:1
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| Re: a comment on The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus |
15-Dec-05/2:26 PM |
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Yes, soil has swords. Anyone from North Carolina has, sometime in his life, seen the morning hoarfrost spearing its way out of the ground.
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
15-Dec-05/2:22 PM |
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Half-baked ideas are the ingredients for profound inovations. Even if most of them crumble, the good ones have so much potential that none should be crushed merely for half-bakedness. Roll out the dough, let it rise!
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| Re: a comment on CHRISTMAS EVERYDAY by amanda_dcosta |
15-Dec-05/2:08 PM |
Yes, and there's no reason for sorrow.
Zodiac and richa enjoy thinking that I've been humiliated in some past. They hope that by saying it, I'll believe, and by agreeing, make it history. They know that history is not necessarily what happened, but what we remember. I usually allow them this small pleasure, not by agreeing, but by not denying. They seem to have so few pleasures in life.
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| Re: The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus |
15-Dec-05/1:40 PM |
I like the first two lines.
In winter, all that lives is not necessarily green.
"The sun has risen to fall"
When it changes from description to story in S3, it feel like the start of a new poem.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
15-Dec-05/1:24 PM |
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I doubt that if all the king's horses and all the king's men couldn't put old Humpty right that he'd be much use in your noble, but British-like, cause.
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
13-Dec-05/6:38 PM |
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Again, you suppose I retaliate. Sometimes yes. This time no.
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| Re: a comment on I saw Your Face Last Night by Dovina |
13-Dec-05/6:36 PM |
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I didn't think of it as ideal, maybe cliched though. Actually, in half-sleep, ideal images often appear.
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| Re: Static by wilco |
13-Dec-05/6:23 PM |
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The cigarettes will not likely burn the exits, unless you mean they will burn exits (leave out the "the"). Isn't it too late after exits are burned to change our habits? Maybe, "because we never changed our habits."
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
13-Dec-05/4:44 PM |
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The finer and more elegant the better. I prefer diamonds on the platter.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
13-Dec-05/4:39 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
13-Dec-05/4:35 PM |
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ok, that's a better answer. All I personally ask, and it may be too much to ask, is that a shred of comonly understood language prevail.
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| Re: a comment on War (edit) by zodiac |
13-Dec-05/4:33 PM |
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I'm in a better mood. I must now step back and observe my mood. Done. It was a frivilous sputtering, but in reality I'd like to meet you and not have you know who I am.
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
13-Dec-05/4:26 PM |
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Alright, LilMsLadyPoet, please don't delete it. And please don't do it again.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
13-Dec-05/4:24 PM |
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Be serious. I'm studious, non-frivilous, impatient-with-levity person who wants an honest answer.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
13-Dec-05/4:08 PM |
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Of course, youre kidding. You don't just write with no direction, absolutely no clue?
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