| Re: On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee |
12-May-05/12:03 PM |
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Is an alwife a fish that spawns on the beach of Lake Michigan? The last line needs some help.
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| Re: Covering the white house by INTRANSIT |
12-May-05/11:45 AM |
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Somehow the title and the last line are alien to to the rest. Otherwise funny.
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| Re: a comment on Finding Gin and Santa by richa |
12-May-05/11:38 AM |
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Some of us receive less pleasure than others from mocking.
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| Re: a comment on Mid Years by Dovina |
12-May-05/11:28 AM |
Thanks for the corroboration. I, of course, am too young to know it.
I'll look at your beeg wun.
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| Re: a comment on Mid Years by Dovina |
12-May-05/11:26 AM |
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If relationships are merely a doorway to having sex more often, then you are among all men most to be pitied.
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| Re: a comment on Mid Years by Dovina |
12-May-05/11:23 AM |
Some day I may cease to be amazed and stop wondering what criteria you use in judging the goodness of poems.
Your concern over my drooping, or rather your concern over my possible concern over my drooping, is very tender indeed, and perhaps stems from concern about virility's illusion turning eventually to a joke. A much appreciated 10.
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| Re: a comment on May Flowers by oneglove |
10-May-05/5:59 PM |
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I'm sure the person you wrote it to understood it that way.
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| Re: My Life by sleeping monk |
10-May-05/5:33 PM |
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I don't think of my life in the comfortable times between being awake.
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| Re: May Flowers by oneglove |
10-May-05/1:37 PM |
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Is it about some May flowers visible in the neon lights at night, and worth the drive?
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| Re: Anniversary by Hallmark |
10-May-05/1:24 PM |
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This is very funny. It may not sell many cards, but it's good.
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| Re: Lake Michigan by jessicazee |
10-May-05/1:16 PM |
I don't see how the weatherman forces you to trust. It's all about probabilities. Also, Doppler is a short-time-range tool and does little to predict "rain all week."
"gladdened cancer tales" is good.
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| Re: The cry of the Locust by nothingtoanyone |
10-May-05/12:59 PM |
Overwritten for what it says.
Why introduce the King James English?
The last line is good.
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| Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT |
10-May-05/12:06 PM |
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Either everyone is misinterpreting this or I am. We have here, as I see it, a political statement in favor of truck drivers with some poetry added, and pretty good poetry to boot. I think you could lose the last two lines.
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| Re: Finding Gin and Santa by richa |
10-May-05/11:47 AM |
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Funny, mocking the séance, but not to some.
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| Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina |
10-May-05/10:49 AM |
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It was sad for Bob when his pet, Baby Dumpling, was dying of congestive heart disease. As I watched them together near the end, it seemed that it was not sad for Baby Dumpling. The dog seemed happy for an extra measure of attention.
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| Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina |
10-May-05/10:45 AM |
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Would you like it better if it didnâÂÂt rhyme?
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| Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina |
10-May-05/10:44 AM |
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Some people say a dog knows when its death is near. I prefer to think that an event so traumatic and unknown before entering it cannot be understood by a dog to the extent that humans can understand it. I think our knowledge on the subject has done us little good.
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| Re: a comment on Old Friend by Dovina |
10-May-05/10:36 AM |
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Hey, sorry to get all serious on you and offend your sensibilities regarding the intelligence of dogs, but really, wouldn't rather not know?
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| Re: a comment on Panama by Dovina |
10-May-05/10:32 AM |
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Dad Gum It, man! This is as much people as a beautiful isthums can be, and possibly penetrable with a gentlemanly approach.
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| Re: Strings by Fayt |
7-May-05/1:31 PM |
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Please stop recycling old poems under a new username.
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