| Re: The Beatles by i_am_the_popsicle |
5-Aug-05/4:50 PM |
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It's been 2600 years since Plato said it. What are we going to do?
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| Re: Never born. by | Broken | |
5-Aug-05/4:59 PM |
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CS Lewis says that even the most ideal cirmstance falls short of providing satisfaction. The best marriage, the best friendship, they all fail to fulfill our wants. It is probable, therefore, he goes on, that only by looking to a force beyond the limitations of humanity can we find satisfaction.
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| Re: Writer's Block by shadows |
5-Aug-05/5:01 PM |
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| Re: Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher |
5-Aug-05/5:27 PM |
Dear Me,
Your're insane!
Love always,
You
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| Re: Philosophy King by crooked_smile |
8-Aug-05/1:55 PM |
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I got 1/3 through this and gave up due to errors in spelling and lack of proof reading.
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| Re: Prayer 2M by peahunky |
8-Aug-05/1:58 PM |
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love = faith? Is that what you mean?
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| Re: More Than The World by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
8-Aug-05/2:05 PM |
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In the language of prayer, all references to God are customarily capitalized, including "You." Eventhough is two words.
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| Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic |
8-Aug-05/2:07 PM |
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Cute, but could be cuter.
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| Re: Dear Aunt Leonard by T. Jonathron Remp |
8-Aug-05/2:09 PM |
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| Re: My Prince by XOXScottishgrlXOX |
9-Aug-05/7:52 AM |
"two" "dark"
Would you love your Prince if you discover he had lied to you?
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
9-Aug-05/7:56 AM |
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You've got potentisl for a good poem here, but the grammar is terrible.
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| Re: Home by Bethy |
9-Aug-05/6:54 PM |
I like the rhythm.
She walked up and down
paw > pa?
The last 2 lines confuse. Maybe you mean "she'd do anything but go back there"
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Aug-05/6:45 AM |
The rhythm is so good that glytches really stand out.
For example:
With four paws to cuddle to you
And two eyes opened so wide?
could be:
With four paws to cuddle you
And two eyes opened wide
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Aug-05/1:07 PM |
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David questioned, why can't we?
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| Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined |
12-Aug-05/7:15 PM |
Do you mean "off my face"?
"a past that's not yet happened" the cycle, the simple thing.
It does seem that simple sometimes.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Aug-05/7:21 PM |
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"permutate" seems too strong. Otherwise I like it.
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| Re: Forever by my side by RGSsparky |
12-Aug-05/7:23 PM |
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Good thoughts, but need better poetic expression.
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| Re: sculpture by ThePariahDog |
12-Aug-05/7:25 PM |
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The first 4 lines are good, given the tight restraint you've chosen. The last 4 lines drift from the theme.
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| Re: Shadow by TLRufener |
12-Aug-05/7:27 PM |
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I like it except for the use of "them" and "they" in referring to a person. The ending is great.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Aug-05/10:40 AM |
Why do you want to trade what you have for propriety? Is it not better to be what you are? Maybe I misunderstand.
I never let Nobody in. > anybody in?
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