| Re: a comment on Entropy by knickytoy |
2-Oct-02/7:27 AM |
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You're my kind of girl. I shall have two to celebrate. Whereabouts do you get your ESB?
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| Re: a comment on Entropy by knickytoy |
2-Oct-02/7:24 AM |
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Do you like bitter? Yummm.
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| Re: Entropy by knickytoy |
2-Oct-02/7:07 AM |
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You promised a poem on entropy and, my girl, you delivered. I am slightly freaked by beer excreting stuff - I shall steer clear of the pub for a while I think. Great image to choose.
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| Re: Ode to the Severn Bridge by Gwyrfab |
2-Oct-02/7:05 AM |
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| Re: The Cross Foxes by Gwyrfab |
2-Oct-02/7:01 AM |
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A rugby song for poets. And a funny last verse.
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| Re: Local Boy Makes Good by Gwyrfab |
2-Oct-02/6:59 AM |
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This is very funny. This is exactly what would happen if Jesus turned up in Wales. Have you read Nicholas Jones's stuff on here?
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/8:37 AM |
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You're spot on. That's exactly what I meant. But other people have read stuff into it that is equally valid, which is interesting.
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| Re: calendared by cobalt |
1-Oct-02/8:24 AM |
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This is strangely old-fashioned, like Francis Thompson or something, but the rhythm bounces away with inevitability - smashing
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| Re: 5 p.m. by cobalt |
1-Oct-02/8:22 AM |
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Great use of alliteration and assonance in this - I can hear traffic.
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| Re: The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt |
1-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
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I must agree with Brazen - good show. Nice to meet you Cobalt.
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/7:55 AM |
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That's better. Now I can start to feel indignant. Grrr.
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/7:52 AM |
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Stop being so nice to me. It makes me blush.
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| Re: Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus |
1-Oct-02/7:42 AM |
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You gotta love Jeff Buckley, and this poem is great. A little bottle or two is damn right. I saw the man play in Bristol in 199-something and he was incredible. My Makers Mark habit started that night. Anyhow. Glad your show went well.
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| Re: Hands. by LucidRevelation |
1-Oct-02/7:39 AM |
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As a gentleman I feel I should look the other way while you girls get on with it...
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/7:29 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/6:07 AM |
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Partly; there's also the idea of a score as in a literal mark left by a chisel and as in the rating that can be given to the narrator as a person. Actually I hadn't even thought of the poemranker interpretation but it works. Thanks!
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| Re: a comment on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/5:59 AM |
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Thank you my friend, I really appreciate your comments.
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| Re: Infection by bluwiz |
30-Sep-02/7:37 AM |
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I've just come back to this. It's nasty and gruesome. I like it.
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| Re: Wondering Soul by Katie |
30-Sep-02/6:26 AM |
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Your use of language is a bit peculiar sometimes - neither 'blithe' nor 'askew' is a noun. I wonder if you could find proper adjectives?
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| Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky |
30-Sep-02/3:33 AM |
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I like this. To the point, sharp, sad.
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