replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:13 AM
At last! Maybe I'll go through puberty soon.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:09 AM
Shed, not shelf. Holy God I'm stupid today.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:08 AM
Actually it was a different brother who blew up the shelf. But my brother is out of hospital today, doing really well. He's a resilient chap, he's reacted as if he's had a minor paper cut or something. Thanks for asking.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 8:01 AM
My brother blew up our shed making beer. Added too much yeast, or something. A hell of a bang was the result, anyway.
replying on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar
30 Oct 2002, 7:55 AM
Stella is reassuringly expensive, so they tell us.
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
30 Oct 2002, 7:50 AM
I thought it was funny-ish. Definitely.
on I Didn't Know by Bonehiss
30 Oct 2002, 7:43 AM
Good non-cheesy rhymes, crisp rhythms, a snappy ending - good.
on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on
30 Oct 2002, 7:41 AM
My first thought was, this is too long. By the end, I was right with you. This is devastatingly sad.
replying on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones
30 Oct 2002, 7:36 AM
Trees, not tress. Sorry.
on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones
30 Oct 2002, 7:35 AM
As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
on betsy's hands by onepinksock
30 Oct 2002, 1:35 AM
Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
30 Oct 2002, 1:26 AM
This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
on Are you spreading it? by Voth269
30 Oct 2002, 1:24 AM
Nope.
replying on Living Conditions by Christof
29 Oct 2002, 7:36 AM
But very quietly. I like to be discreet.
on Worth the wait by INTRANSIT
29 Oct 2002, 7:17 AM
A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?
on In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:49 AM
The last stanza - very wise!
on For Flight by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:47 AM
This is extremely fruity, z, and you know it. 'That release' ? OOh, such filth.
on advice for the heated by <~>
29 Oct 2002, 1:45 AM
This is very practical. Where do you spray it though?