Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/8:15 AM
I have 2 brothers, both older than me. Both as bald as coots and with differing types of crankiness. Why that should excite you I can't imagine, they're not half as scintillating as me. Ahem.
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/8:13 AM
At last! Maybe I'll go through puberty soon.
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/8:09 AM
Shed, not shelf. Holy God I'm stupid today.
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/8:08 AM
Actually it was a different brother who blew up the shelf. But my brother is out of hospital today, doing really well. He's a resilient chap, he's reacted as if he's had a minor paper cut or something. Thanks for asking.
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/8:01 AM
My brother blew up our shed making beer. Added too much yeast, or something. A hell of a bang was the result, anyway.
Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar	30-Oct-02/7:55 AM
Stella is reassuringly expensive, so they tell us.
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	30-Oct-02/7:50 AM
I thought it was funny-ish. Definitely.
Re: I Didn't Know by Bonehiss	30-Oct-02/7:43 AM
Good non-cheesy rhymes, crisp rhythms, a snappy ending - good.
Re: Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on	30-Oct-02/7:41 AM
My first thought was, this is too long. By the end, I was right with you. This is devastatingly sad.
Re: My Feet by smallsun	30-Oct-02/7:38 AM
How did your feet protect you? Are they large and cast from iron?
Re: a comment on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/7:36 AM
Trees, not tress. Sorry.
Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones	30-Oct-02/7:35 AM
As Keats said, as poems do not come as easily as leaves to the tress, you might as well not bother. This is very good.
Re: betsy's hands by onepinksock	30-Oct-02/1:35 AM
Evocative, especially the stuff about clay and glass.
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	30-Oct-02/1:26 AM
This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
Re: Are you spreading it? by Voth269	30-Oct-02/1:24 AM
Nope.
Re: a comment on Living Conditions by Christof	29-Oct-02/7:36 AM
But very quietly. I like to be discreet.
Re: Worth the wait by INTRANSIT	29-Oct-02/7:17 AM
A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/7:12 AM
Almost certainly true.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:49 AM
The last stanza - very wise!
Re: For Flight by <~>	29-Oct-02/1:47 AM
This is extremely fruity, z, and you know it. 'That release' ? OOh, such filth.