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INTRANSIT on Words by Dovina 17 Aug 2005, 4:04 PM
9.999 the word (word) at the start of s-2 really pisses me off. Word?
INTRANSIT replying on Storm Damage by Caducus 17 Aug 2005, 3:52 PM
Not necessarily, Caducus. One does not know how badly the water will sting untill they've gathered their cojones to jump from the high dive. 10 for that alone. Love the first stanza. Thought a favorite poet of yours had passed.
INTRANSIT on Written while Kayaking by Sasha 17 Aug 2005, 3:31 PM
I suggest, kill s-3 and s-4, save the penultimate and attach it to the bottom of s-2. Leave the end.
INTRANSIT on How Angels Sleep by Dovina 17 Aug 2005, 3:15 PM
please drop the full stop at the end of s-2. some stanzas have a submissive beat others don't. why? I got interchangeability between man/god/angels. For some reason that works for me.
Lindz14 on Who I am by Butterfly1120 17 Aug 2005, 1:38 PM
Pretty hardcore -7- Lindz14
Lindz14 on As I sit alone by baby_d 17 Aug 2005, 1:33 PM
Good Job -8- Lindz14
Lindz14 on Angel by Butterfly1120 17 Aug 2005, 1:29 PM
This is great -8- Lindz14
Bethy on The Story of Our Lives by woodstock20000 17 Aug 2005, 12:14 PM
good poem...how about this for a last line... In the life hereafter...;) I really like this...its a fav!!! Bethy
Bethy on The burden of faith by Bobjim 17 Aug 2005, 12:10 PM
Yes, God did enter my mind...but I was kinda thinking about my Dad...:) Bethy
Bethy on Puck by whispern_smoke_wisp 17 Aug 2005, 12:04 PM
hehehe...I made a mistake once...but I was wrong...lol cool poem :) Bethy
Bethy on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle 17 Aug 2005, 12:01 PM
With the changing seasons, your spirit dies then is reborn...its sad, but then if we could all be little orange flowers...we could refresh ourselves seasonally and be new again...sounds good eh...lol :) :) Bethy
Bethy on Storm Damage by Caducus 17 Aug 2005, 11:50 AM
Verry Good....:) Bethy
i_am_the_popsicle replying on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle 17 Aug 2005, 11:45 AM
thankyou, but tell me, how is it sad?
Bethy on Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle 17 Aug 2005, 11:43 AM
Nice...yet sad...:) Bethy
Bethy on Yellow Leather Innards by PsydewaysTears 17 Aug 2005, 11:41 AM
Jeepers...I like this poem...very flowing...yet the subject is a little on the interesting side...:) Bethy
Bobjim on a killer world by AM I EVIL? 17 Aug 2005, 4:34 AM
Oh dear. All in all, I think I wouldn't notice you were gone and I'm trying my hardest to forget. Also, giraffe has an 'e' and in the penultimate line it should be you're not your.
Bobjim replying on Written while Kayaking by Sasha 17 Aug 2005, 4:27 AM
I know that, it's just not as enjoyable to read as the first verse.
Bobjim replying on The burden of faith by Bobjim 17 Aug 2005, 3:33 AM
It should have been 'could be eroded'. And it must be taken with the previous few lines, which talk about God only revealing himself through other people. You can't use Biblical references against this line because the Bible is the words of others afterall. If you didn't believe the disciples through the Bible, wouldn't that be eroding your faith?
x babie alison x replying on Hiding by x babie alison x 16 Aug 2005, 7:48 PM
Your right about the prose comment. However, im debating whether the stoned comment was a good thing or a bad thing. Ill have to try it sometime and see for myself.
Dovina replying on Written while Kayaking by Sasha 16 Aug 2005, 6:59 PM
BTW, "posesss what beauty you percieve" contains two misspelled words.