Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:51 AM
The lady next to me did that in a charismatic meeting and hit me in the eye.
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	3-Sep-05/6:48 AM
no. i'm sure he got it. skipping is sooooo much more fun with wild arm flailing . you should try it!
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	3-Sep-05/6:46 AM
Ultimately I would say that rhythm is not more important. I DO think the first 3 lines set up a nice beat and I thought follow through would be good. Hmmm. Maybe l-4 is okay. one more beat in 5?
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:45 AM
Skip straightly around zodiac, if you want. Do you think he really didn't get it?
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:41 AM
Is your point that "I wasn’t winter-broken, though, I thought that it would stay." has a better beat than "I wasn’t winter-broken, I thought it would stay."? Do you really mean that four beats is better than three? The prior lines don't carry a steady number of beats, why should the last two? Is rhythm really more important?
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	3-Sep-05/6:40 AM
I DO! I DO! I DO! (skipping gayly around Zodiac)
Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:34 AM
Do you really not see the point?
Re: a comment on How Angels Sleep by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:33 AM
If "good" is tossing the heavys, ok, thanks.
Re: a comment on How Angels Sleep by Dovina	Dovina 12.96.171.27	3-Sep-05/6:31 AM
Just another whimsical meaning of "angel." Pink chiffon, I think, would suit you.
Re: Sugar Coating by nentwined	7!3 219.95.8.62	3-Sep-05/5:44 AM
haha nice..
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	zodiac 86.108.10.81	3-Sep-05/5:00 AM
The men put worn and patched sandals on their feet and wore old clothes. All the bread of their food supply was dry and mouldy. Joshua 9:5
Re: The Absense of God by Bluemonkey	zodiac 86.108.10.81	3-Sep-05/4:25 AM
Also, not a haiku.
Re: The Absense of God by Bluemonkey	zodiac 86.108.10.81	3-Sep-05/4:25 AM
Where'd he go?
Re: First Love by Dovina	zodiac 86.108.10.81	3-Sep-05/4:22 AM
Um, because seasons and sunrises USUALLY stay? Forgive me if I think the problem's your expectation, not the sunrise.
Re: The fight by INTRANSIT	wilco 66.61.101.130	2-Sep-05/9:01 PM
naughty...I'd change huge kitchen to large kitchen for better flow.
Re: a comment on Summer Song by wilco	wilco 66.61.101.130	2-Sep-05/5:29 PM
Hmm, I guess you're right. With the music I put to it, I think it sounds more Death Cabish...probably because I've been listening to their new album...anyway, appreciate it.
Re: a comment on at home amongst the strangers by unknown^user	wilco 66.61.101.130	2-Sep-05/5:27 PM
Also, I hope that your family is okay. We have a lot of the "refugees" here in Memphis and they tell some wild stories about Nawlins.
Re: at home amongst the strangers by unknown^user	wilco 66.61.101.130	2-Sep-05/5:22 PM
Good memories. I'm guessing you meant to leave out the capitalizations and normally that would annoy me, but for some reason I think it's okay here. It's funny how watching this business in New Orleans on TV is almost like a movie. You can't believe it's really happening. Funny thing is that if it were a movie, you'd be sitting there, watching it and thinking, "this shit would never happen in a million years".
Re: Summer Song by wilco	unknown^user 128.196.6.126	2-Sep-05/3:04 PM
This is really good. I don't mean to make assumptions on your influences, but this does actually sound like a lot of Wilco lyrics.
Re: How Angels Sleep by Dovina	wilco 66.61.101.130	2-Sep-05/12:37 PM
Hey you've been doing well while I was away.