| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
3-Jan-06/3:24 PM |
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I'm not worried...he stopped talking to me about a year ago after I sent him on a wild goose chase...made him look quite silly...long story.
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| Re: Privacy Compromised by Dovina |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/3:22 PM |
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huh. so you write from your bed, posting to a (this?)website as soon as you awake after a wild night partying at a gala event and rubbing elbows with those who pick apart your ideas and offer critique of your work. and you try to maintain a facade, a mask to hide behind lest they hurt the real you.
that's what i get, anyway. so, who is Tom? <grin>
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| Re: a comment on Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/3:22 PM |
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It's a Tower of Babel then.
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| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/3:20 PM |
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Careful, the Teacher is watching.
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| Re: a comment on Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
3-Jan-06/3:19 PM |
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My answer is, You're blathering. This is insane. We have no common vocabulary with which to continue this discussion. Do you even know the difference between a logical proposition and a proof? Or between logic and proof, even? (DOVINA: A logical proposition is blah blah blah... ZODIAC: Shut up.) I could say your characterizations of fuzzy logic and illogic are ludicrous and the most made-up things I've ever read on poemranker, and you're just going to say "Hair jelly" or something equally ludicrous. Let's just stop. Now.
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| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
3-Jan-06/3:17 PM |
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I'm happy to hear that you flunked out...that makes you at very least a decent person. Be well.
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| Re: when i met sky alone by Prince of Void |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/3:15 PM |
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i will wait for the other parts before voting, but so far it feels a bit disjointed: first two lines read like an opening scene for a overly-dramatic "private-eye" novel, then it becomes personal and ethereal.
the next two lines lead me to believe your neighbors made too much noise for you to finish writing...
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| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/3:14 PM |
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No, I flunked out of that school on the first day. It's not sarcasm really. I was just thinking about the various ways to interpret it.
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| Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/3:11 PM |
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I hope you taped it to her and she read it upon awakening. Then she would not answer as I did.
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| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
3-Jan-06/3:11 PM |
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Ah, I see you're a graduate of the Zodiac school of higher criticism. Could have made the correction right off the bat and saved the silly sarcasm for another occasion.
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| Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/3:07 PM |
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ok, well, this was rather personal. i was eating a grapefruit in the bedroom next to my new lover, watching her sleep.
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| Re: Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/3:04 PM |
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Unless you mean something very annoying, try "pigtailed."
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| Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/3:01 PM |
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poets, i suppose, exercising their license?
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| Re: light [edited] by lmp |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/2:57 PM |
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I can't picture it. Sorry.
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| Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/2:54 PM |
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I cannot claim typoness for pasteless, but must revert to someotherness, which zodiac will explain to you. Actually, your child unpasting his thoughts from the world is a good definition.
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| Re: a comment on The Forgetting by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
3-Jan-06/2:53 PM |
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What does âpaste-toungeâ mean, oh thou of nondictionaryless words?
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| Re: The Stickmen of Fools by embersandenvelopes |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/2:47 PM |
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sounds like a reaction to a visual art installation at a museum. you know, the ones that are technology-based with scrolling signs and all, in contrast with the more "classic" painting art form. my overall impression is that you don't think to highly of the "newer"-style art, no? 7 for interesting sentiment.
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| Re: a comment on Schoolyard Walls by Joe-joe |
Joe-joe 170.28.4.4 |
3-Jan-06/2:42 PM |
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Perhaps or maybe there is a special Lolita in your life that has finally gotten the best of you.
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| Re: a comment on The dance as old as time by wEdible Underpantsw |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
3-Jan-06/2:36 PM |
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dross? hrmm. a term coined by a hoon on a planet not yet deemd ready to support life?
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
LilMsLadyPoet 207.69.137.41 |
3-Jan-06/2:29 PM |
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