| Re: a comment on the man with the red pendant by pollywolly |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/2:13 PM |
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You were doing fine up to the conclusions in the last verse, which lack support or leading story.
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| Re: Window Washer (midtown) by ecargo |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/2:08 PM |
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I saw a flagman once who made a dance of the mundane. It's inspiring - the window washer and your poem.
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| Re: a comment on the man with the red pendant by pollywolly |
pollywolly 62.30.170.78 |
11-Jan-06/2:07 PM |
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walking past this painting every day and looking at it so much i began to wonder what he was trying to say to me. im not much into art, so i did what all writers do and used my imagination!
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| Re: The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/2:01 PM |
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Some commas needed. Using some, implies they're all there, but no, I think.
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| Re: Intestinal Splash by cyan9 |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/1:54 PM |
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After that dream, I don't need to ask. You had a nice day.
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| Re: cat by Dental Panic |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/1:49 PM |
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It would make a more news-worthy test if you were in that box instead of a cat. Now that would be dental panic.
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| Re: the man with the red pendant by pollywolly |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/1:46 PM |
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Art interpretation carried too far.
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| Re: a comment on Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones |
Dovina 17.255.240.6 |
11-Jan-06/1:44 PM |
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Oh, but it is. Get used to it.
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| Re: cat by Dental Panic |
ecargo 167.219.0.142 |
11-Jan-06/12:40 PM |
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Heh--clever. Fun w/ quantum mechanics! The connection between S's cat and what follows is a little tenuous though.
[Cecil Adams' ("The Straight Dope" author) has a nice little versification of the explanation of Schrodinger's cat, for those who, like me, need a refresher: http://www.straightdope.com/classics/a1_122.html ]
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
zodiac 209.193.18.100 |
11-Jan-06/11:36 AM |
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Ace. My vote for God metaphor of the year.
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
<~> 167.206.181.179 |
11-Jan-06/11:33 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
zodiac 209.193.18.100 |
11-Jan-06/11:30 AM |
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No. But I hear She throws great parties.
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
<~> 167.206.181.179 |
11-Jan-06/11:27 AM |
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i've never seen god. you?
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
zodiac 209.193.18.100 |
11-Jan-06/11:24 AM |
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Let me ask you, when exactly IS the last time you saw God outdoors?
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
<~> 167.206.181.179 |
11-Jan-06/11:23 AM |
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exactly.
but on a hermit?
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| Re: a comment on The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
zodiac 209.193.18.100 |
11-Jan-06/11:21 AM |
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Divine Pelvis. Mmmmmmmm....
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| Re: The Hermit on the Thoroughfare by http://mulberryfairy |
<~> 167.206.181.179 |
11-Jan-06/11:15 AM |
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"mortal pelvis" is an odd combo; how can a pelvis be anything but?
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| Re: Flow by zodiac |
<~> 167.206.181.179 |
11-Jan-06/11:13 AM |
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i liked it then and i likes it now.
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| Re: for one day only by pollywolly |
daggatolar 212.100.65.5 |
11-Jan-06/10:02 AM |
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those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?
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| Re: the sweet smell of death by pollywolly |
daggatolar 212.100.65.5 |
11-Jan-06/9:58 AM |
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only that it leaves us out, the death that in the end ends us is and comes from inside us
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