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Free verse № 136787

the man with the red pendant

Member since 2006 · Posted 11 Jan 2006 · 5 comments

piercing eyes glare from the blackness within the painting capturing my gaze, whites lost in a sea of penetrating dark a slow twinkling shaft distracting my contact pulls me down, where a red pendant hangs drawn loosely round his neck crucifix of christ i expect to see on this ageing man resembling a priest, but no, only a single red ruby dances before me teasing to look deeper his eyes are a warning, deliberatly trying to draw my gaze from the hidden dangers of the bloody stone only he knows of the secrets locked within, the secret which lost his soul, forever remaining in darkness sealed in the burning red of the hells bane

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[6] Dovina 11-Jan-06/1:46 PM Reply
Art interpretation carried too far.
[n/a] pollywolly › Dovina 11-Jan-06/2:07 PM Reply
walking past this painting every day and looking at it so much i began to wonder what he was trying to say to me. im not much into art, so i did what all writers do and used my imagination!
[6] Dovina › pollywolly 11-Jan-06/2:13 PM Reply
You were doing fine up to the conclusions in the last verse, which lack support or leading story.
[n/a] pollywolly › Dovina 11-Jan-06/2:43 PM Reply
thank you for your comments, much appreciated
[n/a] zodiac › Dovina 11-Jan-06/5:04 PM Reply
Hey, I'm sorry. Come around more.