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shaving (Free verse) by crooked_smile Perhaps perfection can be
compared to shaving with
a bad razer.
Even if you do manage
to get rid of all the hair,
you now have nicks and red bumps
that you have to contend with.
Up the ladder:
Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title)
Down the ladder:
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Posted: April 8, 2005 4:53 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2005 4:53 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11099 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.10.244
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9-Apr-05/10:43 AM
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Then it's not perfection, is it?
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