Re: Historical Epic by Bobjim	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-Feb-06/7:49 AM
A throbbing nimbus of sperm.
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	17-Feb-06/5:07 AM
Metaphorically speaking you've got more balls than they do.
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/7:45 PM
You surely believe that at least one thing is true. What is it?
Re: Mentally Disabled by drnick	crazyknight 202.83.47.151	16-Feb-06/7:44 PM
confusion, confusion is there no end to our confusion. man had existed for so long, we have so much to show for it, yet why do we get the feeling that we are travelling through a maze...............
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/7:43 PM
You could apply for membership in the gentlemen's Rutherford Club. I applied once and was kindly told that I don't meet the minimums.
Re: A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	crazyknight 202.83.47.151	16-Feb-06/7:40 PM
we humans are complicated, our lives are complicated, we dont know enough, but i believe that we must search, the price may be steep to the man who does it. but does life have any other meaning. amassing riches makes no sense, we cant take it. just existing is useless as time is limited. we have to search well done your poem reflects the disillusionment that sets in. always remember we dont know anything, there is so much to learn. things that may be true may be false..........
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	16-Feb-06/7:32 PM
I've got some pure English blood too. Oh God I hope it's enough to make him like me.
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/7:27 PM
He hates the Irish, cockneys, and all non-English-gentlemen. And he has little use for women.
Re: a comment on Mentally Disabled by drnick	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	16-Feb-06/7:27 PM
No, her husband works at a nut house. As far as "God" goes, yeah she could but why make her spell out Jehova all those times. I based the ten off from comments alone.
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	16-Feb-06/7:20 PM
Yeah, they both think I'm black. The quotation marks should have tipped him off though. You can't say I lied to him, I am Irish you know, maybe even Black Irish.
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/7:12 PM
I read those comments and can't believe DA would think everything you say about yourself is real. He hates blacks, calls them "it" not "he" or "she." Or presents his character that way. Did you know there are two of him?
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	16-Feb-06/7:11 PM
It began with your poem "Racism".
Re: a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.100.11	16-Feb-06/7:06 PM
Speaking of smart asses, did you know that D. A. still assumes I'm a black man because I quoted the line "I'm black and I'm proud" from an Irish white guy in the movie "The Commitments" many many months ago. He's been trying to offend my "blackness" ever since. The best was when he talked of my brothers in Africa.
Re: a comment on Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/7:05 PM
When she’s upset it’s tears, blubbering, and a thirty-minute monolog. When he’s upset, he says, “What the hell were you thinking?” Who was the most upset? That’s what I want to write about.
Re: a comment on Valentine 2 by zodiac	zodiac 209.193.14.62	16-Feb-06/5:23 PM
I love that book.
Re: Valentine 2 by zodiac	Dental Panic 84.27.6.94	16-Feb-06/4:31 PM
'then hiked back to the camp with meat and tin, his knife – the usual things.' And germs too. "Syphilis, gonorrhea, tubercilosis, and influenza arriving with Captain Cook in 1799, followed by a big typhoid epidemic in 1804 and numerous 'minor'diseases, reduced Hawaii's population from around half a million in 1779 to 84,000 in 1853, the year when smallpox finally reached Hawaii and killed around 10,000 of the survivors." Sorry, I'm deep into Jared Diamond's 'Guns, Germs and Steel' at the moment.
Re: The Gold and silver dress by Caducus	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/4:23 PM
Why is it when our eyes ask, "will we always be like this," his answer sounds like some gull, crying for the leaving tide? Either that, or we hear it in "I'll always love you."
Re: a comment on Mentally Disabled by drnick	Dental Panic 84.27.6.94	16-Feb-06/3:46 PM
Trying to make no sense is hard work.
Re: Together they Fell by Fayt	Dovina 69.175.32.104	16-Feb-06/3:44 PM
And old tear-jerker told well. The last line is not needed, but the rest is - love, that is - needed.
Re: The Gold and silver dress by Caducus	Dental Panic 84.27.6.94	16-Feb-06/3:38 PM
Her eyes asked me "will we always be like this" sums it all up. Soup many have swum in.