Re: of Arabia by ecargo	drnick 69.215.254.240	14-Jul-06/12:19 PM
All too true is the second to last stanza. Rock the casbah.
Re: The Lonesome Loser by Dovina	drnick 69.215.254.240	14-Jul-06/12:09 PM
Please stop writing about me.
Re: a comment on I hate making titles by drnick	amanda_dcosta 202.164.140.187	14-Jul-06/12:07 PM
:-)
Re: a comment on I hate making titles by drnick	drnick 69.215.254.240	14-Jul-06/12:04 PM
Spank you very mooch.
Re: a comment on I hate making titles by drnick	drnick 69.215.254.240	14-Jul-06/12:01 PM
Ya, it would have been better had I done that. This was just something I whipped together in class, and I liked how simple and short it was. I do need a title(sigh).
Re: a comment on I hate making titles by drnick	drnick 69.215.254.240	14-Jul-06/11:57 AM
thanks, dude.
Re: Tribute by creepshow	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.23	14-Jul-06/5:55 AM
Sorry.... not my cup of tea.
Re: a comment on Inside You by creepshow	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.23	14-Jul-06/5:51 AM
By the way, I like the last line.
Re: Inside You by creepshow	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.23	14-Jul-06/5:51 AM
A cry of desparation! You've brought it out well.
Re: I hate making titles by drnick	amanda_dcosta 202.164.139.23	14-Jul-06/5:47 AM
A nice scene, the trees.. the shadows... It's cool how you emphasize on a few things and make a poem out of it. It would be better with a title though.
Re: Selkie (An Antique of Lurid Partes - w/Girl on Girl Action!) by ecargo	some deleted user 64.140.228.209	14-Jul-06/12:49 AM
It's work like this that makes reading poemranker worthwhile--an absolute diamond.
Re: a comment on Two Fundamentalists Playing Cribbage by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 172.193.183.107	13-Jul-06/11:17 PM
Thank you, much and often
Re: Selkie (An Antique of Lurid Partes - w/Girl on Girl Action!) by ecargo	ALChemy 209.23.202.76	13-Jul-06/7:02 PM
It's all about the finish with the long ones and this one is orgasmic.
Re: a comment on Selkie (An Antique of Lurid Partes - w/Girl on Girl Action!) by ecargo	ALChemy 209.23.202.76	13-Jul-06/7:00 PM
Told you so E... Expect many more accolades to come.
Re: I hate making titles by drnick	ALChemy 209.23.202.76	13-Jul-06/6:45 PM
This is a good description. If it was a metaphor for something it would be amazing but it seems to not be attached to any thing specific except a row of trees. Maybe a title like "State Park" or something would help give it more of a setting.
Re: I hate making titles by drnick	Ranger 86.140.71.123	13-Jul-06/2:09 PM
Love it. Only crit is that the penultimate line seems a little short - I'd change it to "to answer all the/crackling calls". Other than that, super.
Re: a comment on cat by Dental Panic	Ranger 86.140.71.123	13-Jul-06/2:06 PM
What if this inconsequential planet in an inconsequential galaxy is the only planet capable of sustaining life - or at least, life at the level of humans? And what if humans genuinely do have a purpose? Then this inconsequential planet becomes very consequential indeed.
Re: Two Fundamentalists Playing Cribbage by MacFrantic	Ranger 86.140.71.123	13-Jul-06/1:58 PM
*falls off chair laughing*
Re: Selkie (An Antique of Lurid Partes - w/Girl on Girl Action!) by ecargo	Ranger 86.140.71.123	13-Jul-06/1:57 PM
"soaring tree"..."suitor's serenade to start"..."liquid eyes and liquid grace"..."nightjade surging sea" -- you are almost certainly the sexiest person I've never seen...this puts everything I've written thus far to shame. P.S. - you didn't read my latin villanelle. It'll be your kind of thing, methinks ;-)
Re: The Lonesome Loser by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 219.93.174.102	13-Jul-06/4:47 AM
It is so pathetic to see that you managed to get only three votes over a period of three days.... Are we the only ones who log onto PR? I wish there was something we could do about it.