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Inside You (Free verse) by creepshow A raging river,
A ravaging knife,
Slicing away at the core of my being.
Your every action is one of hate,
Mortifying as it is, Macabre is my taste.
What is at the bottom of your pit of despair?
Why must you inflict such abuse?
One can only twist and bend so much...
Up the ladder:
Subdued
Down the ladder:
Strangers in a foreign land
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Posted: July 13, 2006 7:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2006 7:55 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8854 Comments:
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amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.139.23
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14-Jul-06/5:51 AM
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A cry of desparation! You've brought it out well.
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amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.139.23
> amanda_dcosta
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14-Jul-06/5:51 AM
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By the way, I like the last line.
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