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Inside You (Free verse) by creepshow
A raging river, A ravaging knife, Slicing away at the core of my being. Your every action is one of hate, Mortifying as it is, Macabre is my taste. What is at the bottom of your pit of despair? Why must you inflict such abuse? One can only twist and bend so much...

Up the ladder: Broken Free
Down the ladder: Dear Will,

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8800
Posted: July 13, 2006 7:55 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2006 7:55 PM PDT
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[8] amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.139.23 | 14-Jul-06/5:51 AM | Reply
A cry of desparation! You've brought it out well.
[8] amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.139.23 > amanda_dcosta | 14-Jul-06/5:51 AM | Reply
By the way, I like the last line.
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