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Inside You (Free verse) by creepshow

A raging river, A ravaging knife, Slicing away at the core of my being. Your every action is one of hate, Mortifying as it is, Macabre is my taste. What is at the bottom of your pit of despair? Why must you inflict such abuse? One can only twist and bend so much...

amanda_dcosta 14-Jul-06/5:51 AM
A cry of desparation! You've brought it out well.




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