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Disposal and Liberation (Free verse) by MacFrantic
I jumped from the top of the Empire State Building
The month was August
The sun was setting
How cliché
A bit more than a quarter mile
And as I fell
The wind pulled dreams from my head.
Memories exploded upwards from my chest
As my words faded with them
I stood at the top of the Empire State Building
The month was August
The sun was rising
How cliché
A bit more than a quarter mile
Looking down
I saw my twisted and empty body
Little changed of me as I occupied myself
And nothing else
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Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8809
Posted: November 23, 2006 12:53 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2006 12:53 AM PST
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