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hide and seek (Free verse) by oneglove I count to ten
Looking isnât needed
I know where to find you
At the heart we carved
I look towards the sun
Under orange leaves
I can see you there
Resting softly on the highest branch
Iâve grown an inch since last time
Another might be enough
Up the ladder:
Idle
Down the ladder:
Aisle by the bread counter
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Posted: October 4, 2005 8:23 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2005 8:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8812 Comments:
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wilco @ 66.61.101.130
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4-Oct-05/8:35 PM
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not bad.
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